Ses goûts musicaux - minimum 10 lignes

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, j'aimerais avoir votre avis sur ce que j'ai écrit, je ne suis pas très bonne en anglais, j'aimerais que l'on me dise ce qu'il faut corriger svp.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Hello,
Personally, I like several musical styles: the first one, the New Age, which I listen to a lot. For example Secret Garden, Akash...
Then, the classical music, as Ave Maria de Shubert, either Mozart, Passionata de Beethoven... I also listen to a great deal of music grunge as Nirvana (My girl, come has you are...). I also listen to musics of the other styles, which I do not know necessarily, certainly fired by the bloues, as any music! For example, videogames of Lana del Rey, wave goodbye of Steadman, Lifehouse, Coldplay, a little U2, stereo Smooth of Car Wars, One Republic, Natalie Walker, Missy Higgins, Chris Levy... But I never listen to a rap, I do not call it of the music, but to each his own!