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Sujet du devoir

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Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

1.Leisure activities and hobbies

I like reading very much. When I get bored, the first things that I make it's to open a novel. I have got a great collection of books in various fields as classical litterature, art, history. For 2 month, I've registed on Wattpad. It's a apllication where everyone can write and post his story. Also, you can vote and share your favorite book. This application is very useful because if you download it on your mobile, you can read easily everywhere. I spend over one hour on this. I also enjoy watch tv. My favourite progran is The Simpson because it's very silly and even if I fail an episode I still understand. I often ride bike same same I live in countryside, it's great. Yhe landscape is beautiful.

2.Ambition

i've always been my dream to go round the world. I would like to stay in a English-speaking country like Australia to improve my knowledge English. This month, I've found a website EF who organize many linguistic travels. My parents think it's a good idea but they want that I pay my travel myself. That why, the next year, I'm planning to work in the hotel where my mother has been a housekeeper since 2008. Thus, I could earn lot of money, save it and I'm going to Australia. Also, when i'm 18, I'm planning to stay in Brazil because my half sister lives over there. Before me, my father got married and had a child called Aline. I haven't met her in reality and I've always wanted to know her.

3.Achievement

My greatest achievement was when I ran 3 kilometre. I moved to Seraing in 2010 and I also changed school. Over there, there was a competition between all the school of Seraing each year. The first time when I took part at the race, I arrived at the last position because I walked. I didn't care however my friends made fun of me. It hurt me. One year after, I decided to work very hard: I trained once a week. I was motivated and I surpassed me. I put a place up. I have never been so proud and happy in my life.

-What's your greatest achievement?

4.First experience

I'll never forget my first where I stayed over a month at hospistal. It was about 12 years ago, I felt very excited because it was a public holiday and I didn't go to school. This day, I got up early and I watched TV. After, I was hungry, I came down the stairs to the kitchen. I wanted to take my breakfast but my mother didn't make it. I managed: I took a yoghurt in the fridge but I needed a spoon.

When I pulled the drawer a electrical wire clung, the kettle fell and hot water spilled on my arms. I cried and screamed. My mother quickly ran toward me.

She removed my tshirt and put water on my arms. She don't know what to do, she panic and she decided to take the bus to the hospistal. Over there, doctors grafted skin from my thingh to my arms. I stayed in hospital for a month until my skin healed.

5.My celebrity

Lady Diana was born in England on July 1st 1961. When she was a child, She was good at swimming and she won the school dancing competition. She first met Prince Charles in november 1977. Charles came to her house to visit her sister Sarah. 6 month later, they separated . In 1980 Diana moved to London and got a job in a kindergarten as a teacher. The romance with Prince Charles started when she went to watch him play polo. After, Prince Charles asked her to marry him and she said yes. They got married on July 29 1981 at St Paul's Cathedral in London. She had 2 children. She was very popular and she appeared in the newspaper everyday. Diana worked a lot to help and comfort people in unfortunate situations such as people with AIDS and homeless people. She understood the suffering of other people because she suffered herself. As the her relationship got worse and eventually they divorced in 1996. She continued to support many charities and other causes such as the campaign to forbid the use of landmines. In 1997, she met Dodi Fayed. For the first time in many years she seemed to be very happy. Unfortunately, she died in a car acident on August 31st 1997 in Paris.

6. An unforgettable holiday

Five yars ago, I went to Mauritius with my mother. We stayed for a month at my grandmother's house. The flight in France because there isn't direct flight from Belgium to Mauritius. The journey was very long: over 12 hours. When we arrived at the airport, my grandmother was waiting us. We took a taxi and we talked the whole way. Then, my grandmother helped us to take the suitcases in the trunk. My mother was very tired because she didn't sleep in the plane. After I was putting my clothes, I went swimming in the sea. The water was blue and I could see the bottom and many colorful fish. We spent the first two days sunbathing and lazing around. The second week, we visited Port-Louis, the capital where we walked through the street market. We bought typical spices as curry, saffron, clove. The third week, I woke up early to see the dolphins. I could touch them and swim with them. Before our departure, my grandmother invited the whole family and friends at a party. We had a barbecue on the beach. Two days later, we left Mauritius with unforgettable memories. I was very sad to go away because I don't know when I could still my grandmother.