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Bonjour/bonsoir,
Il faut que nous fassions en groupe de 2, un dialogue téléphonique racontant nos dernières vacances.
J'aimerai que vous nous aidiez à savoir si notre dialogue est bon et juste. Nous n'arrivons pas à terminer le dialogue sur une note originale...
Merci d'avance.
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- Hi, what’s going on?
- Hi you, nothing is going on… How were your holidays?
- I went abroad, more precisely to United States…
- How long?
- I stayed there for one week
- And what did you do?
- My parents wanted to rent a car for make the tour of the city and I took a lot of photos. It was a hive of activity and we did an excursion for to go see dolphins, turtles and of harmless sharks.
- But still ?
- We had dinner in very good restaurants, we met a lot of people and the hotel staff was very nice but my mother spent a lot of money. Everything went well and I would have preferred to stay longer.
- I would have liked to be in your place ! Lucky !
- Yes ! And you ? Where'd you leave ?
- Me, I went with my friends at Porto Rico. We booked a hotel face to the sea. The first days, we decided to spend our time doing nothing.
- Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait... Sorry to cut you but... you didn't do anything ?
- Humm... Yes and no... let me finish, you will understand...
- Ok, explains
- So, I was saying... The weather was beautiful there. But after a while we were tired of doing nothing so we went sightseeing and shopping. People there are like the sun of their country, so warm and so welcoming ! We went tot the villa of a friend's parents for our last day. It was cool ! We had such a great fun. I will never forget these Porto Rican holidays !
- Oh ok, I would have liked to be with you !
- ...
Voilà, mais nous n'arrivons pas à faire la suite avec originalité...
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Il y a quelques petites fautes...
Les deux premières phrases sont mal dites:
"-Hi, how are you?/how do you do?/what's up?
-Hello! There's nothing new (...)"
Pour dire "je suis allé(e) aux Etats-Unis" ici on dit "I went abroad, more precisely to THE United States".
C'est "My parents wanted to rent a car TO make the tour of the city" et non "FOR make the tour"
Même chose pour "We did an excursion TO go see the dolphins (...) AND harmless sharks" (pas de "of" avant harmless)
On ne peut pas dire "but still?", je te conseille de remplacer ça par "What else?"
"We had dinner in SOME very good restaurants" par exemple aussi...
"Were'd you GO?" et pas "were'd you LEAVE?"
On dit juste "I went with friends", et pas "Me, I went...."
"We booked a hotel IN FRONT OF the sea"
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Pour la suite du dialogue, tu pourrais pas example continuer sur une note plus négative du genre "Oh, mais en fait il y avait [évènement] qui était pas trop bien donc je pense pas que tu aurais vraiment aimé d'être avec moi!"
...Puis vous pourrez continuer en racontant des choses pas très chouettes qui vous sont arrivées...Pour finir sur "Bon, au final on a passés de bonnes vacances même si il y avait des trucs pas trop fun. Je te verrais plus tard. A plus!"
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