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voila le texte the inexperienced ghost ; i caught a ghost in the Mermaid Club Clayton explained. we started making fun of him and asked him to tell his story you know i was allowed to sleep at the club last night ; well . I had to leave my room in the middle of the night and I came upon him in the long passage His back was towards me and I saw him first ; I knew he was a ghost because he was transpent but I was able to see he was learn young man with a moustache He realized I was there turned on me and emitted a little boo he repeated are you a member? I asked NO HE said ; Im a ghost ; That s no exuse , You are not alowed to haunt here,This is a respectable club,I think you schould vanish immediately, He looked embarrased The factis Sir I can t vanish I ve forgotten how to do it and I can t get back I came last night and had to hide in cupboards and empty bedrooms because I wasn t able to disappear
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essaye de faire un résumé d'abord puis demande nous s'il est suffisamment complet et/ou s'il est juste au niveau de la langue mais on est pas sensé faire le résumé à ta place ;)
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