exercice d'anglais

Publié le 2 avr. 2011 il y a 13A par Anonyme - Fin › 15 avr. 2011 dans 13A
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Sujet du devoir

Faire une présentation en anglais d'une personne anglo-saxophone célèbre, originaire d' USA (d'Amérique), d'Australie, de Grande Bretagne(d'Angleterre) ... de notre choix.
Exemple : chanteur, acteur, sportif, scientifique, auteur....
Personne vivante ou morte . Utiliser le prétérit, le présent, des auxiliaires modaux, du passif, des verbes de goût... Utiliser les mots suivants: furthermore, then, finally.
Dire la ville, les dates de naissance, de mort, le nom, le prénom, le lieu de naissance et de mort... de la personne, faire une petite biographie de la personne.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir


Bonjour, voici mon texte :
I choose Agatha Christie.
Agatha Christie, of her name of young girl Agatha Mary Clarissa Miller, is born 15 september 1890 in the Devon in England and is died the 12 january 1976 to 85 years in the Wallingford to Oxfordshire in England.
She is of nationality english, a father american and a mother english.
She lose his father then that she was a children. Her mother her encourage very early to write.
Furthermore to 16 years she begins a education of sing that she abandons very quickly.
Then during the war of 1914-1918, his husband having gone to the front, she begins to work to the hospital of Torquay.
Finally it's to this first novel "The mysterious case of Styles". This is in 1926 that the work is published. She becomes famous at the publication of book : " The murder of Roger Ackroyd".
She takes the habit of write 2 books for year. Agatha Christie has write also a novels polices under the pseudonym : Mary Westmacott. Before her death she does die the main character of its " Hercule Poirot".

Voila pouvez vous me dire si mon texte est bien traduit , si j'ai fait des fautes, quels sont mes fautes, si j'ai bien respecter la consigne, si j'ai bien utiliser les temps, si la biographie est bien ....s'il vous plait. Merci d'avance.



3 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 2 avr. 2011
I choose Agatha Christie.
Agatha Christie, with her name of young girl Agatha Mary Clarissa Miller, is born 15 September 1890 in the Devon in England and is died the 12 January 1976 at 85 years in the Wallingford in Oxfordshire in England.
She is
English, a father American and a mother English.
She loses his father then that she was a child. Her mother she encourages very early to write.
Furthermore at 16 years she begins an education by singing that she abandons very quickly.Then during the war of 1914-1918, his husband having gone to the front, she begins to work at the hospital of Torquay.
Finally it's in this first novel "The mysterious case of Styles". This is in 1926 that the work is published. She becomes famous at the publication of the book : " The murder of Roger Ackroyd".
She takes the habit of writing 2 books for years. Agatha Christie has written also a novels polices under the pseudonym : Mary Westmacott. Before her death she does die the main character of its " Hercule Poirot".


VOICI LA CORRECTION j'espere n'avoir rien oublier.
Anonyme
Posté le 8 avr. 2011
I chose Agatha Christie.
Agatha Christie, her real name was Agatha Mary Clarissa Miller, was born on september 15th, 1890 in the Devon in England and died Januayr 12th, 1976 at 85 years in Wallingford in Oxfordshire in England.
She was English, her father was American and her mother English.
She lost her father when she was a child. Her mother encouraged her very early to write.
Until she was 16, she learnt to sing but she gave it up very quickliy.Then during the 1st world war, while her husband was battling in the front, she began to work for the Torquay hospital.
Finally she released her first novel "The mysterious case of Styles". This was in 1926. She became famous after the release of the book: " The murder of Roger Ackroyd".
She used to write 2 books a year. Agatha Christie wrote police novels aka Mary Westmacott : Mary Westmacott. Before dying she has her main character of her novel "Hercule Poirot dead.
Anonyme
Posté le 8 avr. 2011
Before dying she had her main character of her novel "Hercule Poirot dead.





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