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Je dois recevoir une star sur un plateau de télévision et j'ai presque fini mon interview mais je voudrais que vous me dissiez ce qui ne va pas ce qu'il y a à corrige ou me faire une correction, car je vais être filmée et je ne voudrais pas me tromper de plus nous sommes notés.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Hello everybody!Today i'm very very happy because we welcome a star on the set. she is my idol.
I'd like to introduce Katy Perry.
Pleased to meet you Katy. how are you?
i'm very well, thank you.
Ok! sit down please
Thank you!
Erm.... Katy i have many questions for you!
Ok, is not a problem! I'm in the set for answer the questions.
Yes is real! So what's your real name?
My real name is Katherine Elizabeth Hudson.
Waoh!! your name is very long.
Yes, is very long
And.... when were you born?
I was born on twenty-five, october, nineteen eighty-four
So! are you twenty-six years old?
Yes.
Ok! where are you from?
I'm from california.
Ok! Katy, Are you an only child?
No, I've got one brother and one sister. David and Angela.
Are have you any project for your seconde album ?
Erm... Yes, Yes
What kind they are ?
In my second album i want to put there titles who were the best
Erm... you are very clever
What do you love in your life ?
In my life, i love my job and my family. my family is very important for me.
What's your job, except singer
I am an actress and songwriter.
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salut voila c très bien fait mais juste quelques petites fautes ce n'est rien tiens :
Hello everybody!
Today i'm very very happy because we welcome a star on the set. she is my idol.
I'd like to introduce Katy Perry.
Pleased to meet you Katy. how are you?
i'm very well, thank you.
Ok! sit down please
Thank you!
Erm.... Katy i have many questions for you!
Ok, is not a problem! I'm in the set for answer the questions.
Yes is real! So what's your real name?
My real name is Katherine Elizabeth Hudson.
Waoh!! your name is very long.
Yes, is very long
And.... when were you born?
I was born on twenty-five, october, nineteen eighty-four
So! are you twenty-six years old?
Yes.
Ok! where are you from?
I'm from california.
Ok! Katy, Are you an only child?
No, I've got one brother and one sister. David and Angela.
have you any project for your seconde album ?
Erm... Yes, Yes
What kind they are ?
In my second album i want to put there titles who were the best
Erm... you are very clever
What do you love in your life ?
In my life, i love my job and my family. my family is very important for me.
What's your job, except singer
I am an actress and songwriter
Hello everybody!
Today i'm very very happy because we welcome a star on the set. she is my idol.
I'd like to introduce Katy Perry.
Pleased to meet you Katy. how are you?
i'm very well, thank you.
Ok! sit down please
Thank you!
Erm.... Katy i have many questions for you!
Ok, is not a problem! I'm in the set for answer the questions.
Yes is real! So what's your real name?
My real name is Katherine Elizabeth Hudson.
Waoh!! your name is very long.
Yes, is very long
And.... when were you born?
I was born on twenty-five, october, nineteen eighty-four
So! are you twenty-six years old?
Yes.
Ok! where are you from?
I'm from california.
Ok! Katy, Are you an only child?
No, I've got one brother and one sister. David and Angela.
have you any project for your seconde album ?
Erm... Yes, Yes
What kind they are ?
In my second album i want to put there titles who were the best
Erm... you are very clever
What do you love in your life ?
In my life, i love my job and my family. my family is very important for me.
What's your job, except singer
I am an actress and songwriter
Bonjour Galiano,
Voici ton texte corrigé:
Hello Ladies and Gentlemen!
Today I'm very happy because we'll be welcoming a star on the show, she is my idol.
I'd like to introduce Katy Perry.
- Pleased to meet you Katy. how are you?
- I'm very well, thank you.
- Ok! Sit down please
- Thank you!
- Erm.... Katy I have many questions for you!
- Ok, is not a problem! I'm on the show to answer questions.
- Yes, it's true! So what's your real name?
- My real name is Katherine Elizabeth Hudson.
- Waoh!! your name is very long.
- Yes, indeed, it is very long.
- And.... when were you born?
- I was born on the twenty-fifth of October nineteen eighty-four
- So! Are you twenty-six years old?
- Yes I am!
- Ok! where are you from?
- I'm from California.
- Ok! Katy, Are you an only child?
- No, I've got one brother and one sister. David and Angela.
- Do you have you any projects for your second album?
- Uhm... Yes, I do.
- What are they?
- In my second album I want to put the best titles in it!
- Erm... you are very clever.
- What do you love in your life ?
- In my life, I love my job and my family, my family is very important for me.
- What's your job, apart from being a singer?
- I am an actress and a songwriter.
Voilà!
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Voici ton texte corrigé:
Hello Ladies and Gentlemen!
Today I'm very happy because we'll be welcoming a star on the show, she is my idol.
I'd like to introduce Katy Perry.
- Pleased to meet you Katy. how are you?
- I'm very well, thank you.
- Ok! Sit down please
- Thank you!
- Erm.... Katy I have many questions for you!
- Ok, is not a problem! I'm on the show to answer questions.
- Yes, it's true! So what's your real name?
- My real name is Katherine Elizabeth Hudson.
- Waoh!! your name is very long.
- Yes, indeed, it is very long.
- And.... when were you born?
- I was born on the twenty-fifth of October nineteen eighty-four
- So! Are you twenty-six years old?
- Yes I am!
- Ok! where are you from?
- I'm from California.
- Ok! Katy, Are you an only child?
- No, I've got one brother and one sister. David and Angela.
- Do you have you any projects for your second album?
- Uhm... Yes, I do.
- What are they?
- In my second album I want to put the best titles in it!
- Erm... you are very clever.
- What do you love in your life ?
- In my life, I love my job and my family, my family is very important for me.
- What's your job, apart from being a singer?
- I am an actress and a songwriter.
Voilà!
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Merci bcp de ton aide chikenmanben95
et merci encore! je tétre doné otan dmal
et merci encore! je tétre doné otan dmal
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"I like my job"
plutot que what's ur job, except singer moi je dirais "do u got an other job except singer"*(As tu un autre metier a pars chanteuse?)
ah aussi, si tu parle a l'oral : is not ; isn't
et on dit pas im very well mais i'm fine =)
bonne chance pour la suite^^