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En Anglais, je dois présenter une photo.On y voit 8 kangourous, et un stagiaire à côté.
J'aimerai que vous corrigiez mon texte, qui doit surement être bourré de fautes. Merci.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
This document is a photograph.In this picture, taken in Wollongong in Australia, there are a Park Ranger trainee and eight kangaroos, in the foreground.
The trainee is a teenager and he is on the left.
It's a boy.
He has got medium-long curly chestnut hair. He wears blue jeans, yellow blue and red shoes, a purple sweater and a purple cowboy hat.
I think this teenager must be fifteen years old.
Kangaroos are on the right.
They are brown on the back and white on the belly.
They are very comfortable with the young man.
They (regardent) the trainee, and they (ne sont pas effrayez par le stagière).
In the background, there is a forest, probably the ground of the kangaroos.
(Je pense que faire un stage dans une réserve d'animaux doit être probablement très instructif).
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This document is a picture.
This picture is taken in Wollongong in Australia, in the foreground , we can see a Park Ranger and eight Kangaroos.
On the left , there is a teenager , this teenager is the trainee, hes has got medium long curly chestnut hair. He wears blue jeans , and red shoes, a purple sweater and a purple cowboy hat .
We can suppose this teenager is fifteen years old .
The kang
This picture is taken in Wollongong in Australia, in the foreground , we can see a Park Ranger and eight Kangaroos.
On the left , there is a teenager , this teenager is the trainee, hes has got medium long curly chestnut hair. He wears blue jeans , and red shoes, a purple sweater and a purple cowboy hat .
We can suppose this teenager is fifteen years old .
The kang
This document is a photograph.
In this picture, taken in Wollongong in Australia, there is a Park Ranger trainee and eight kangaroos, in the foreground.
The trainee is a teenager and he is on the left.
It's a boy.
He has got shoulder curly brown hair. He wears blue jeans, yellow,blue and red shoes, a purple sweater and a purple cowboy hat.
I think this teenager is fifteen years old.
Kangaroos are on the right.
They are brown on the back and white on the belly.
They are very comfortable with the young man.
They look the trainee, and they aren't affraid of the trainee.In the background, there is a forest, probably the ground of the kangaroos.
I think go work with the animals is very instructive !
Bon ça se voit que tu as fait ça avec le traducteur même avec mes modification ça se voit encore !
Je te conseillerai de le refaire avec tes mots à toi ! Car ton professeur le verra tout de suite !
In this picture, taken in Wollongong in Australia, there is a Park Ranger trainee and eight kangaroos, in the foreground.
The trainee is a teenager and he is on the left.
It's a boy.
He has got shoulder curly brown hair. He wears blue jeans, yellow,blue and red shoes, a purple sweater and a purple cowboy hat.
I think this teenager is fifteen years old.
Kangaroos are on the right.
They are brown on the back and white on the belly.
They are very comfortable with the young man.
They look the trainee, and they aren't affraid of the trainee.In the background, there is a forest, probably the ground of the kangaroos.
I think go work with the animals is very instructive !
Bon ça se voit que tu as fait ça avec le traducteur même avec mes modification ça se voit encore !
Je te conseillerai de le refaire avec tes mots à toi ! Car ton professeur le verra tout de suite !
they look at the trainee and they're not frightned by him.I guess that working a while in an animal park must be very interesting and instructive.Pour le reste, vous n'avez pas fait de fautes, c'est juste un peu désordonné.1er plan, on voit ça(paysage)arrière -plan on voit ça (paysage)et après vous détaillez.
Désolé , j'ai eu un bug ... donc je reprend
The kangaroos are on the right , they are brown on the back and white on the belly They are very comfortable with the young man.
They lookc the trainee and they are not afraid by the ( stagiaire je ne sais pas comment on dit )
In the background we can see a forest ,she must be the ground of the kangaroos.
I think to do a stage in a zoo must be very interisting .
The kangaroos are on the right , they are brown on the back and white on the belly They are very comfortable with the young man.
They lookc the trainee and they are not afraid by the ( stagiaire je ne sais pas comment on dit )
In the background we can see a forest ,she must be the ground of the kangaroos.
I think to do a stage in a zoo must be very interisting .
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
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This picture is taken in Wollongong in Australia, in the foreground , we can see a Park Ranger and eight Kangaroos.
On the left , there is a teenager , this teenager is the trainee, hes has got medium long curly chestnut hair. He wears blue jeans , and red shoes, a purple sweater and a purple cowboy hat .
We can suppose this teenager is fifteen years old .
The kang