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bonjour , demain j'ai un humm.. coment on va dire euuu.. un texte a faire en anglais , et j'aimerais vous demandez ci vous pouvaient me rendre un petit service , est-ce que vous pourrait me corrigé mais fautes dans mon texte , ci il y a des fautes merci bien ; texte ===>My room is big , I have a double bed , a desk quite big on the desk I have a computer mobile because I like chat with friends . A great wardrobe with a mirror . I have a shelf for books and magazines and a bedside table for put my alarm clock . I have a CD player . There was carpet in my room . There are posters on the walll know singers and series and fashion because I like singers and serie and fashion . I have picture a class and my family and friends because I love friends and my family .
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merci de m'aider ;)My room is big , I have a double bed , a desk quite big on the desk I have a computer mobile because I like chat with friends . A great wardrobe with a mirror . I have a shelf for books and magazines and a bedside table for put my alarm clock . I have a CD player . There was carpet in my room . There are posters on the walll know singers and series and fashion because I like singers and serie and fashion . I have picture a class and my family and friends because I love friends and my family .
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bonjour,
en français "corigement" n'existe pas, c'est correction!
My room is big. I have a queen-sized bed. On my big desk, there is my computer: I like to chat with my friends.
I need a great wardrobe for all my clothes. It has a mirror in it. I have shelves (plusieurs?) for books and magasines. Near my bed, there is a bedside table for my alam clock. I have a CD player. There is a carpet. There are posters on the walls about faschion, singers and TV series because I like it. I have pictures of my class (?), my family and my friends because I love them.
Voilà, j'ai corrigé les quelques fautes de grammaire et la syntaxe.
Je n'ai pas (trop) améliorer le niveau de langue:
tu utilises beaucoup "I have" et "there is".
Bon courage
en français "corigement" n'existe pas, c'est correction!
My room is big. I have a queen-sized bed. On my big desk, there is my computer: I like to chat with my friends.
I need a great wardrobe for all my clothes. It has a mirror in it. I have shelves (plusieurs?) for books and magasines. Near my bed, there is a bedside table for my alam clock. I have a CD player. There is a carpet. There are posters on the walls about faschion, singers and TV series because I like it. I have pictures of my class (?), my family and my friends because I love them.
Voilà, j'ai corrigé les quelques fautes de grammaire et la syntaxe.
Je n'ai pas (trop) améliorer le niveau de langue:
tu utilises beaucoup "I have" et "there is".
Bon courage
c est tres bien apparemment tu comprends bien l' anglais
My room is big. I have a double bed and a big desk with a laptop on it because I enjoy chatting with my friends. I alsow have a warbrobe with a mirror and a shelf for all my books and magazines. Behind my bed, there is a bedside table to put my alarm clock. On the floor, there is a (red,blue..) carpet and on the walls, we can see many posters showing singers, series and fashion because these are my hobbies. In the other side of my room, I have a CD player and a place where I have my picture class and other pictures with my friends and my family because I love them alot.
Voilà, j'espère ne pas avoir fait de fautes et avoir pu t'aider.
Bonne continuation.
Voilà, j'espère ne pas avoir fait de fautes et avoir pu t'aider.
Bonne continuation.
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il y a quelques répétitions dans ton texte, mais bon, tu n'es qu'en 5ème, c'est donc difficile de connaître bcp de tournures différentes.
Pour dire ce qu'on possède: HAVE GOT ou HAVE (mais en 5ème, on apprend HAVE GOT donc il faudrait peut-être l'utiliser)
My room is big: I have got a double bed and a big desk. On my desk there is a laptop (= ordinateur portable), because I like chatting with my friends. I've also got a huge wardrobe with a mirror. I have (have got) a shelf for books and magazines and a bedside table to put my alarm clock. I have got a CD player. There is a carpet in my room. On the walls, there are posters showing famous singers, series and fashion, because I like these singers and series and I am fond of fashion. I have got pictures of my class and my family, because I love my friends and my family.