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Bonjour !
Voici quelques parties de mon texte d'anglais. Mais je ne suis pas sur de la traduction. Pourriez vous me corriger ? Merci beaucoup !
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This evening of 13 November 2015, where 130 people were cowardly murdered. An evening which had to be happy for many, but which proved to become a nightmare. A nightmare in the service of the folly of men claiming to be prophets, but which kill and break representing life. They have nothing to lose and it’s ready to sacrifice their lives in the service of a mad cause.
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The reaction the more justified after these despicable crimes, after the carnage, would be that we yield to fear. But we must remain firm and United. Defeating terrorism will take time and will require a constant effort, starting with the fight against jihadist propaganda campaigns. It will take much strength to combat these dangerous networks, taking advantage of new technologies to spread their lethal propaganda. But the test shall strengthen us. These enemies, we will prevail. We are advocating the concepts of tolerance, peace and secularism. These attacks must make us aware that he must act quickly, and act to the origins of terrorism.
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Bonjour bonjour, j'ai corrigé quelques fautes
On this evening of 13 November 2015, 130 people were cowardly murdered. An evening that was meant to be happy for many, but that turned out to become a nightmare. A nightmare in the service of the folly/madness of men claiming to be prophets, but who killed and broke representing lives. They have nothing to lose and they're ready to sacrifice their lives in the service of a mad cause.
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The most justified reaction after these despicable crimes, after the carnage/slaughter, would be that we yield to fear. But we must remain firm and united. Defeating terrorism will take time and will require a constant effort, starting with the fight against jihadist propaganda campaigns. It will take much strength to combat these dangerous networks, taking advantage of new technologies to spread their lethal propaganda. But the test shall strengthen us. These enemies, we will prevail. We are advocating the concepts of tolerance, peace and secularism. These attacks must make us aware that we must act quickly, and act to the origins of terrorism.
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