Résumé et commentaire de The Call of the Wild / L'appel de la forêt

Sujet du devoir

Il fallait résumé ce livre de Jack London, The Call of the Wild, en ne dépassant pas les 50 mots - malheureusement je n'y arrive pas ! - et faire un commentaire de 50 mots, maximum 75.
Le but étant de condenser, un maximum avec un anglais sans fautes.
J'aurai donc besoin d'une lecture extérieure m'aidant à voir mes fautes (grammaire principalement et tournure de phrases). Merci.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Summary:

One day, Buck, a powerful St. Bernard-Scotch Collie, is stolen by Manuel, his master’s assistant. First mistreated, the dog is then sold to husky breeder. With the gold rush, he has to work hard and find his place with the other dogs. But he is bought again. And again.
Until John Thornton, a respectable man, take care of him. Buck protects him, but John is killed. Then, Buck listen the call of the wild…
[74 words]

Commentary :

Impressive. A beautiful story, and not only for the children. Not content with moving us, London also makes us think about the harshness of the life – and not only of the wild life. Concepts like friendship and loyalty, too often forgotten, occupy a central place in
the novel.
Most of the readers tell this is London’s better book ; actually, I read some of his books, and the first I read still my favorite : White Fang. I find it more accomplished than The Call of the Wild.