BAC anglais oral 2

Publié le 26 avr. 2015 il y a 9A par Anonyme - Fin › 29 avr. 2015 dans 9A
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Sujet du devoir

I’m going to speak about the notion spaces and exchanges. I am going to speak about different types of exchanges like persons' flows, for example the immigration, disparity north and south. The definition is very opened in our century, the world is defined as a “grand people" where every day, million persons decide to pass borders for any reasons.
What is image of the migration today on the one hand, we are going to demonstrate that the migration is very difficult and later we are going to define the contributions to the society.

 

To begin with, we can say that this century is synonymous of globalization where the migration movements are very present.
The most famous migration movements is done of the "South" towards the "North"
For example, the border between USA and Mexico can be qualified of world because she is much frequented.
Frida Kahlo's painting “Self-portrait in the border between Mexico and The United States " evokes the ancient history of Mexico represented by pyramids and symbols of Aztec gods.
His paint is opposed to the modernity and the dynamism of USA. But, this advance is not synonymous of good, paint represents this country as a hard country, without life. In fact, Mexico is victimize of neo colonialism.
Mexicans migrate to USA for a better way of life, found a job and for American dream.

However, countries of the North want to take advantage of cheap workforce to amplify their benefits.

So, immigrants are victims of problems economic and they are exploited.

 

Moreover, we can say that the exchanges take part to the cultural enrichment and discovery of new condition of life.
In fact, Erasmus is an opportunity for the students have to be going to study in other countries. The program allows to study in new conditions, to live in another country and to discover new cultures.
Spain is also an actor of these exchanges. For the young persons, Spain’s climate and the party give them desire of being going to study there.
But as it is indicated by the title of an article of 20minutos “The scholarship Erasmus not only is to go of party “In fact, new dialects appear with this one trend of migrates. For example the Spanglish is a dialect based on Spanish and English spoken by the Latin people in USA. This dialect shows that the mix of two cultures can give a new comportment in society.

 

To conclude, this phenomenon has advantages and disadvantages. In fact, this phenomenon allows of living in a better country and found opportunities of work. These exchanges take part to the enrichment of the culture, of the economy of two countries, and also of the person who travels.
Nevertheless, the migration is very hard because the countries doesn’t want it makes south borders opened by economic reasons and the people are exploited.

 

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Bonjour,

 

J'ai réalisé la deuxième notion dans le cadre du bac.

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Merci d'avance.




1 commentaire pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 27 avr. 2015

Bonsoir!

Voici une correction de la synthaxe et de quelques termes. Je n'ai en revanche pas moddifié le sens que tu as donné à ton texte.

 

I’m going to speak about the notion of spaces and exchanges. I am going to speak about different types of exchanges like the flow of people, for example the immigration, and disparities between North and South. The definition is very opened in our century, the world is defined as a “grand people" where every day, million of people decide to pass borders for different reasons.
What is image of the migration today? First,  we are going to demonstrate that the migration is very difficult and later we are going to define its contributions to the society.

 

To begin with, we can say that this century is synonymous with globalization . The migration movements are very present.
The most famous migration movements are done from the "South" towards the "North"
For example, the border between USA and Mexico  is very frequented.
Frida Kahlo's painting “Self-portrait in the border between Mexico and The United States " brings up the ancient history of Mexico, which is represented by pyramids and symbols of Aztec gods. 
 This painting can be opposed to the modernity and the dynamism of USA. But, this advance is not necessarily good.  The painting represents this country as a hard and lifeless one. In fact, Mexico is the victim of neo colonialism.
Mexicans migrate to USA for a better way of life, to find a job and to live the American dream.

However, countries of the North want to take advantage of cheap workforce to amplify their benefits.

Immigrants are then victims of economical problems and they are exploited.

 

However, we can argue that the exchanges take part to the cultural enrichment and discovery of new ways of life.
 For example,  Erasmus is an opportunity for European students  to study in other countries. The program allows to study in new conditions, to live in another country and to discover new cultures.
Spain is also an actor of these exchanges. For the young people, Spain’s climate and the party give them desire to go  there.
But as it is indicated by the title of an article of 20minutos “The scholarship Erasmus not only is to go of party “In fact, new dialects appear with this new trend. For example Spanglish is a dialect based on both Spanish and English and is spoken by the Latino people in the USA. This dialect shows that the mingle of two cultures can give birth to a new comportment in society.

 

To conclude, this phenomenon has both advantages and drawbacks. In fact, this phenomenon can allows to live in a richer country and to find opportunities of work. These exchanges take part to the enrichment of the culture, of the economy of two countries, and also of the person who travels.
Nevertheless, the migration is very hard because the countries don’t always want. The most fragile people can be exploited.

 

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