Bac d'anglais :)

Sujet du devoir

Bonsoir,

Pourriez-vous me corriger mes fautes si vous en trouver s'il vous plait, car je passe bientôt mon oral d'anglais.

Je vous remercie d'avance :)

Spaces and Exchanges :

I'm going to talk about the notion  « Spaces and Exchanges », The notion of Space and Exchange concerns the movements of exchange in various times, territories and geographical zones. These exchanges can be human, economic or linguistic. I will try to answer the following question «  How is mobility a choice and / or an obligation? ». At first, I am going to speak about the subject " to be au pair girl ", in second part I shall speak about the movie Slumdog Millionaire.

I am going to tell you about the subject "to be au pair girl", we have not addressed this subject in progress, but I wanted to talk about it, because I find this topic interesting for the notion.
Being Au Pair girl is the fact of going to another country to keep children, it allows certain teenagers to earn money, to discover at the same time the culture of a country, a lifestyle, a food. It is an excellent way of learning and of speaking the language of the country. It is a big challenge to be realized, it is an adventure that makes grow I think, In this context, the mobility is a choice.

Mobility can also be an obligation, we watched the film "Slumdog Millionaire", this film takes place at the beginning in the city of Mumbai in India, 2 young brothers are forced to leave the city can after the death of their Mother, they are going to have to manage alone to work, raise money, feed. The people who live in cans in cities are poor people who do not have the means to offer themselves something else. Most of the people dreams to leave cans cities but they do not have the means.  In this movie, leave is at the same time a choice, but more an obligation, because they do not have a family anymore, they have to survive.

To conclude, we can see that the mobility is at the same time a life choice, as the young people who make " au pair girl " or study in other countries, but that there are also obligations, as the people who live in cans cities, or those who live in countries in wars and who have to leave them to survive.

Of my opinion, I think that to make "girl au pair" or still to travel the foreigner to study or learn a new language is a good way to take its independence and to travel, it allows to meet new people, new places, it has to be a beautiful journey.