Correction d'un texte en anglais

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, je dois effectué une rédaction en anglais, étant donné que je ne suis pas très forte en anglais voir pas du tout, j'aimerai que quelqu'un me corrige ma rédaction en anglais. Merci d'avance..

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

At the moment, I look for a collocation wiht someone that's why I write you. Indeed I have find your advertisement and I will be interested in your offer.
First I introduce myself so you can better choose if you want or not to life together. Me name is ****, I'm from France and I come in London for six months. I think that I can share a flat because I'm someone who is serious, pleasant, very organized. Futhermore I'm open-minded. I think that a roomshare can to adapt more quickly daily. Then we can share moment such as the lunch.
If I come in London it's because I want to know a new experience. But also I want to improve the language so as to I will enrich my knowledge because English is a important language. I'm single so the collocation avoids the solitude. I have choose to use the way of living because of it's really economic therefore I can save.
The price is 200$ per month not includind bill. It's that ? But how must does the bills approximately cost ? I find the flat very nice and enough big. Moreover there is a balcony with a great view. I have still matter. Can we invite people in the flat ? Can we have animals ?
the bills approximately ? I find the flat very nice and enough big. Moreover there is a balcony with a great view. I have still matter. Can we invite people in the flat ? Can we have animals ? Are the food share ?
I hope that you answer quickly and positively.