dialogue

Publié le 15 janv. 2011 il y a 13A par Anonyme - Fin › 18 janv. 2011 dans 13A
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Sujet du devoir

Imagine you are 2 soldiers (a British one + a German one) who experienced the Xmas truce in December 1914
50 years later, you meet again and recall happy moments. write a dialogue

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> G : Hellon Steve Hank ?
> E : Yes, it's me, who are you ? Can I help you ?
> G : I'm Edgar Schmidt, I was a German soldier during the first World
> War. Do you remember the Christmas truce during the war ?
> E : Of course I recall me about this, it's was not a singular event, but How did you
> find me ?
> G : I kept your adress such a long time to meet you again after the war. I just do a small hook during my holydays with my wife.
> E : I still got your adress, but I failed to contact you again.
> G : It's because I have moved after the war, but I haven't forgotten you.
> E : I have a wonderful memories of this Christmas truce. You and all
> German soldiers made me happy !
> G : Yes, it was an unexpected event during this terrible war. I don't
> still realize that British soldiers, my ennemy made me Christmas pudding.
> E : And all this generous sharing, i've exchange my cigarettes with Germans cirgarettes who are better :
> that's the way i always bought German cigarettes after the war.
> G : For my part, the roast turkey Christmas was the best Christmas meal i've never eat !
> E : So a paradoxical instant ...
> G : Why did the war don't stop at this moment ?
> E :



2 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 15 janv. 2011
Je trouve ton dialogue assez bien. Voici la correction:

> G : Hello ! Steve Hank ?
> E : Yes, it's me, who are you ? Can I help you ?
> G : I'm Edgar Schmidt. I was a German soldier during the first World War. Do you remember the Christmas truce during the war ?
> E : Of course I do, it wasn't a singular event ! How did you find me ?
> G : I kept your adress such a long time, hoping to meet you again after the war. I just did a small hook during my holydays with my wife.
> E : I still have your adress, but I failed to contact you again.
> G : It's because I moved after the war, but I hadn't forgotten you.
> E : I have wonderful memories of this Christmas truce. You and all the German soldiers made me so happy !
> G : Yes, it was an unexpected event during this terrible war. I still can't realize that British soldiers, my ennemies, made me a Christmas pudding.
> E : And all this generous sharing... I exchanged my British cigarettes for German ones which were better; that's why
I always bought German cigarettes after the war.
> G : For my part, your roast turkey was the best Christmas meal I had ever eaten !
> E : Such a paradoxical instant ...
> G : Why did the war don't stop at this moment ?
> E :
Anonyme
Posté le 16 janv. 2011
Merci pour la correction.
Je n'ai plus d'idées pour terminer le dialogue...

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