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Bonjour, est-ce que vous pouvez me corriger mes fautes de conjugaisons surtout, et si possible ne pas trop bouger mon texte.
S.V.P.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Hi Babe !

I'm sorry i haven't written before because it's difficult to found a time... and a mark with my nw life, i don't make a habit of it. I dislike moving...
Here, all it's more biger. For example my flat measure 100m², it's the size of ours house ! There is a lot of shops between my flat, with three or four storeys. Fast food are everywhere. It's so disproportionate than England, and people are crazy. You know, in ours city the population is very calm down.
So, about my job, i work in computer company, in San Franscisco in Central City. It's my dream, i'm very glad to talk and express my feelings with crazy men about high tech, new generation. In my desk, and all desk there is photography of Jobs Steve because we work sometimes in processus Apple etc.
My boss proposed to me two years with him for become assistant. It's exceptional...
Yet, i pass twenty hours sometimes in my work because of meeting, i'm tired and i found this job so hard.
Furthermore, the distance have been complicated, say to me your opinion please, if you want : i just pass one year here, it's already good for me.
With all my love.
Daren.