Introduction épreuve de bac d'anglais LVA, regarder si possible les fautes d'orthographe et la fin de mon introduction qui me semble un peu fade.

I am going to develop the notion of places and forms of power. First of all, I would like to DEFINE WHAT IE MEANS: In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence the behavioUr of people. The notion of power implies a basic division between those who have and exercise power and those who have none or little. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim TO limit its excesses and resist it. WITHIN this notion, I think it is worth focusing upon the DIFFERENCE BETWEEN rioters looting for fun and genuine social discontent. I'd like to point out that, by looking at this difference, we can see different point of view of each participant. We are going to talk about the London riots in 2011.

C'est fini? tu nous dis que tu vas parler des emeutes mais ca s'arrete la.

Aussi attention de bien differencier entre l'anglais et l'americain.

Je viens de retravailler mon introduction, c'est mieux maintenant?

I am going to develop the notion of Places and forms of power. First of all, I would like to define what it means: In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence the behaviour of people. The notion of power implies a basic division between those who have and exercise power and those who have none or little of it. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim to limit its excesses and resist it. Within this notion, I think it is worth focusing upon the difference between rioters looting for fun or genuine social discontent? I’d like to point out that with this question we can see each point of view of the participant. We are going to speak about the London riots or “Blackberry riots” it’s all started the fourth august 2011 because of the death of Mark Duggan a black man who was shot by police during arrest. To illustrate this I have chosen three documents, one about the women rioters, another which is a discussion between the Prime Minister and police commissioner and to finish a cartoon.

C'est important si je confond certain mot (anglais/ américain)?

Ok. Je n'avais pas vu que c'etait seulement l'introduction. Je n'ai pas le temps de regarder maintenant mais si tu peux m'envoyer tout ca par mail a frenchsub@iname.com, j'essaierai de te le corriger ce week end.

oui c'est important. par exemple les belges, les suisses et les quebecquois disent "nonante" au lieu de "quatre vingt dix". Utiliserais tu "nonante" dans un devoir de francais?

Je viens de t'envoyer un E-mail, encore merci pour tout le travail que tu m'aides à faire!!!!