P'tit coup de main pour correction devoir anglais

Je pense que c'est juste 

J'aurai dis "to go to my hotel" plutôt que "to go in my hotel" après tu vois mais c'est plus cohérent!

Mais aussi "i am going to visit the city " et non "visit a city" puisque tu dis au début que tu vas à NY

après la phrase qui suit ne veut rien dire tu devrais mettre " because it's the most famous place of NY"

BROOKLYN avec un Y!

"to take a cup of ..."

"and to visit a japanese..."

Je pense il y en a d'autre je te dis ça plus tard :)

J'ai revu les trois quarts de ton texte, donc ci dessous voici le texte que j'ai recopié en incluant mes corrections

This summer I plan to visit New York City , When I arrive at the airport i'm going to take a yellow cab to go to my hotel who is close to Central Park. Then I'll take time to phone my parents to tell them I had a good trip. I will certainly be tired so i will deserve a good nap.
After my nap, I will visit the cityn especially Central Park, because it is one of the most famous place in New York. Then i think i will eat a hot dog and hamburger in the street.
Afterwards, I will meet my girl friend at the airport because she arrives later. we will probably go and have dinner in a restaurant, then we will spend our evening either at village vanguard who is a famous jazz club or at comedy cellar who is a comedy club.

i'm going to take a yellow taxi to go in my hotel which is close to Central Park

When i am arrive i will be tired so i will have a nap

i am going to visit the city especially central park, because it is the place most famous in new york. Then i think i will eat hot dog and hamburger on the street.
Next i will join my friend at the airport because she will arrive after me,

The next day, in the morning we will go jogging in cenral park afterward as soon we take our shower we going to Brooklyn to have a cup of coffee and to visit a japanese garden. So when we have finished breakfast we will go visit a famous
museum, and then to finish our hollidays as soon as night will come we will walk in times square to see the skyscrapers.

I'm so excited about my trip,

Merci beaucoup pour votre aide!!!!!!