Seats and Forms of power

Bonjour, s'agit-il du texte complet ? Si oui, il manque une annonce de plan, une problématique, et une définition plus complète des termes de la notion.

The notion I’m going to deal with is seats and forms of power.

I’m going to define the notion. The power is the capacity to influence people. ( définition un peu courte ... ) Firstly, we can find different forms of power like for instance medias, terrorism, strikes, demonstrations, …

Secondly, it exists various seats of power in the world as streets, homes, banks, courthouses, the White house in USA, etc... I would like to present this notion by showing the power in university because universities are a seats of power and what’s more it’s where students learn their power of citizen. In England, a law was passed in 2011 which increase tuition fees from £4500 to £14000 (£pounds). In others words, tuition fees treble. That’s why students vented their anger during demonstrations against the law.

We can ask is it justified? ( we may wonder if it's justified )

In theory, the increase ( increasement => augmentation ) of tuition fees permits to reined in the deficit. What’s more ( familier => préférer : moreover, otherwise, futhermore ... ), the high price of universities allows maintain the high level of education but it also digs ( he / she / it => s au verbe ) a gap. In practice, it’s a kind of selection because it’s ( it : démonstratif ; it's : it is => verbe ) means that students who don’t have the means to pay can’t make studies unless if they have a grant or if they take a loan but it’s a big deal because they have to pay off and it takes years to do, in addition of the fact that it’s expensive. Besides, a diploma may worth the sacrifice because with it you can have a well pay job which allows you to pay off. Nevertheless, students drop out university and for some of them, the price of universities is the only barrier to their vocational goals.

People who are against this reform explain that, in addition of the fact it’s too expensive, it makes a financial and intellectual selection which reduces the diversity of people in university.

I consider that university should be accessible for all. And England will win if it’s the case, because the more there are graduate, the more there are qualified people who make work the economy of the country. In a nutshell, students are right to defend their opinion.

And I would like to bring us to the defense of opinions. Indeed, the defense of opinions is a forms of power and that’s why I would like to speak about Uk Youth Parliament. The UK Youth Parliament is a youth organization in the United Kingdom, consisting of democratically elected members aged between 11 and 18 who represent people of their ( them : eux ; their : leur => I like to play with them / I like to play with their child )  age.

Members meet regularly to hold debates and plan campaigns at least three times locally a year and on a twice national level, which includes the annual debate within the Chamber of the House of Commons every November.

On the whole, seats and forms of power occur at multiple scales. Sometimes, the representative of groups try to make understand their voice even if sometimes it doesn’t work and that’s why people demonstrate.