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merci beaucoup

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I agree with this critic. It seems to me inconceivable that people kill a person because of a political party. What struck me most when I read this story is the fact that the murderers have killed the mother of suzie and franc , who was innocent. Us, French, who live in a democracy where the freedom of expression and the human rights are respected, we have difficulty imagining us in a dictatorship in which a simple text can make us die. to be obliged to send his children in a foreign country to ensure their protection seems difficult to me to imagine. How can people kill out of the children because their father told the truths?
What I find shocking is also the racism of some people, for example when Suzie arrives in the school, it is already very hard for her but she undergoes also the mockeries on behalf of the other pupils. I think that it must be very hard for the two children to go to people whom they do not know. it is the first time that they are alone, without their parents to help them.
Personally I would not be imagined me in the same situation as zusie and Franc when night came on London, they hadn't no food, no shelter and nobody to protect them.