commenter un texte et le graphique en anglais a l'oral

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, j'ai essayé de faire quelque chose à l'écrit mais je ne sais pas si c'est correct ce que je dois dire a l'oral devant la classe je vais leur montré le texte et le graphique puis je dois commenter je dois expliqué de quoi sa parle, je dois parlé 10minutes

Merci de bien vouloir me dire si c'est correct ou pas et rectifié mes erreurs s'il y en a merci

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

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China had a unbelievable economic growth in the past decades of years. However, the rate of growth will probably drcrease in the next couple years because they don't have too much potential to allow the growth anymore. In fact, it was a hard job to keep their GDP go up for those many years (even though not all the growth were real, anyway, well done Chinese Government). It is important to keep in mind that the goal of the economy growth is to improve people's standard of living, but Chinese Government keep the rate of growth by controling their banks and the price of their houses, and that's not the "real" grow.