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Bonjour à tous.Je poste ce message afin de vous demandez votre aide pour corriger mes fautes de traduction étant donné que je ne suis pas très bon en anglais.
Je vous remercie d'avance de prendre le temps de m'aider, se serait très aimable à vous.
Je dois faire une expression écrite sur l'exposé que j'ai préféré en classe sur l'écosse. J'ai choisit la présentation d'Edimbourg faites par un de mes camarades et je dois citer ce que j'ai retenu.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voici le texte en français :Mon exposé préféré était celui sur Edimbourg. Il me semblait important étant donné qu'il nous apprenait plusieurs informations sur la capitale de l'Ecosse. Un point central pour apprendre l'histoire, la culture et le mode de vie des écossais. J'ai appris qu'Edimbourg est d'environ 450 000 habitants. La ville est sur des collines et possède notamment un château reconnu dans le monde entier. En plus du Château, Édimbourg compte de nombreux lieux intéressants comme le Royal Botanic Garden, la cathédrale Saint-Gilles, la National Gallery, Charlotte Square, le Scott monument ou encore le Royal Museum of Scotland. Le palais de Holyrood (Holyrood Palace) est la résidence officielle de la reine lorsqu’elle séjourne dans la ville. Édimbourg est célèbre pour son festival, le plus grand du monde, qui dure trois semaines en août et propose de nombreux spectacles de qualité dans toutes les disciplines. Grâce à cet exposé je connais d'avantage la capitale de l'écosse.
Voici ma traduction ou j'aimerai votre aide pour corriger les fautes :
My favorite exposé was the one on Edinburgh. It seemed important given that we learned them more information about the capital of Scotland. A central point for learning about history, culture and lifetyle of Scotland. I learned that Edinburgh is about 450,000 inhabitants. The city is on hills and has acknowledged such a castle in the world. In addition to the Castle, Edinburgh has many attractions like the Royal Botanic Garden, St Giles Cathedral, the National Gallery, Charlotte Square, the Scott Monument, or the Royal Museum of Scotland. The Palace of Holyroodhouse (Holyrood Palace) is the official residence of the Queen when staying in the city. Edinburgh is famous for its festival, the largest in the world, which lasts three weeks in August and offers many quality performances in all disciplines. With this statement I know to benefit the capital of Scotland.
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Deiyaneira a déjà fait un super travail de correction.
Je me permet d'enlever les quelques petites erreurs encore présentes.
My favorite oral presentation was the one about Edinburgh. It seemed important to me considering that we learned from it many informations about the capital of Scotland. It is the main point in order to learn more about the history, the culture and the lifestyle of Scotts. I learned that Edinburgh is about 450,000 inhabitants. The city is located on hills where a castel can be found, which is famous in the whole world. Besides the Castle, Edinburgh counts many attractions like the Royal Botanic Garden, St Giles Cathedral, the National Gallery, Charlotte Square, the Scott Monument, or the Royal Museum of Scotland. The Palace of Holyroodhouse (Holyrood Palace) is the official residence of the Queen when she decides to stay in the city. Edinburgh is famous for its festival which is the biggest in the world, it lasts three weeks in August and offers many quality performances in all disciplines. Thanks to this presentation I learned to know the capital of Scotland better.
Deiyaneira a déjà fait un super travail de correction.
Je me permet d'enlever les quelques petites erreurs encore présentes.
My favorite oral presentation was the one about Edinburgh. It seemed important to me considering that we learned from it many informations about the capital of Scotland. It is the main point in order to learn more about the history, the culture and the lifestyle of Scotts. I learned that Edinburgh is about 450,000 inhabitants. The city is located on hills where a castel can be found, which is famous in the whole world. Besides the Castle, Edinburgh counts many attractions like the Royal Botanic Garden, St Giles Cathedral, the National Gallery, Charlotte Square, the Scott Monument, or the Royal Museum of Scotland. The Palace of Holyroodhouse (Holyrood Palace) is the official residence of the Queen when she decides to stay in the city. Edinburgh is famous for its festival which is the biggest in the world, it lasts three weeks in August and offers many quality performances in all disciplines. Thanks to this presentation I learned to know the capital of Scotland better.
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My favorite oral presentation was the one about Edinburgh. It seemed important to me considering that we learned from it more information about the capital of Scotland. It is A midpoint in order to learn more about history, culture and lifestyle of Scotland. I learned that Edinburgh is about 450,000 inhabitants. The city is located on hills where you can find a castel which is famous in the whole world. Besides the Castle, Edinburgh count many attractions like the Royal Botanic Garden, St Giles Cathedral, the National Gallery, Charlotte Square, the Scott Monument, or the Royal Museum of Scotland. The Palace of Holyroodhouse (Holyrood Palace) is the official residence of the Queen when she decides to stay in the city. Edinburgh is famous for its festival which is the biggest in the world, it lasts three weeks in August and offers many quality performances in all disciplines. thanks to this presentation I learned to know better the capital of Scotland.