Aide pour corriger des fautes

Sujet du devoir

En fait, voilà, j'ai une rédac à faire, je l'ai fais, mais mon niveau en anglais est plutôt merdique, c'est pour ça que je voulais vous demander si ça ne vous dérangereriez pas de corriger mes fautes.
Merci d'avançe!!!

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

I was on holidays in the Caribbean with my family to have a rest and enjoy my family.because I was afraid :I had been neglecting them for a while . Indeed, I had lots of work and my company was very busy too. I was in a restaurant when I noticed a man who was staring at me. He was alone and it seemed to me he was the same age as me. His face reminded me something, but i couldn't remember who it was … He smiled to me and he came up to me .
- Clark, don’t you recognize me?
I was in profond reflexion while an instant to concentrate on who it was, and his face reappear ed suddenly to me : Oh, yeahh sure , dave, my pal , long time no see you . How the destin is good done . I didn’t expect to see you here!
Dave- Me too, I can’t believe my eyes when I see you just in front of me , I believe I was dream. This is your children?
_ Yea, my son Jake, hey Jake say hello, this is a friend, and my daughter Bethay, and this is my wife
Dave = (to the wife) nice to meet you lady
Dave = ( to the kids) Hey hunnies, they are really cute . Your son looks like to you , it seems you when you were younger ! This is incroyable
Clarks = Thanks you , don’t you want you go on this disucussion I other placee , we – ( they are going the conversation walking)
Dave= You have changed , as I can notice it . You seem responsible, and a real man on who you can cunt , a dad of family , you have even a wife and some kids ! Wahouu, it’s end the time where we did all the bullshit uninmaginable, and that we drink and have some drugs all the night . How is possible?
C = Indeed, like you can notice, I have ripen ( murir) and I realise that it lead nowhere to do what we did before, this is the youth, and who we could be cunt, but I kept some excellent memories, but at one moment of the life, you have to stop to live in the excess . However I have to confess you that it’s my wife and her love who have lots of changed me above all .Have you got some news of Adam, mumu, andcaroline
Dave = Adam has lost his parents, and he have some difficult to (remonter la pente)? :, I was with him the last week, mum died of overdose, and caroline get married
Clark = Oh my god, poor adam, I will visite him, does he live in the same place, oh mumu no, I can’t belive that, where is she entered, I will pay a tribute fo her, where is she entered ? I am glad for carline
Dave ) She is entered in the cimetiere Montparnasse, and yea , adam live in the same place .
Clarks = oh sad news… and you what did you do after all this years!
Dave = ah if you knew … I stayed always the same, I can’t control me., and the excess make me become at the same time alcoholic and drug addict . I am here cause there is the best centre of rehabilitation , and I decide to come her cause my girlfriends made me a dileme: either I have to change, either she would’t want of me . I am in permission of sortie of the centre cause I had lots of volition, and the results are very promisig, and I don’t feel the lack of drug of alcohol . I want to find a job, event if I am millionaire, to have the impress to ean myself my life, and also to pass the times.
Clarks : Ohhh, I am here to listen it, I congralutate you, I am passeby here ( je suis passé par là) , hang on, and I have a good news for you . I am a director of a company, and I can hire you with pleasure
Dave oh thank you dude, really, I dnt know how to dismiss you
Clark= this is avbsolutely normal, , I m dedicated for my friend..
Thanks to the help of Clark, dave manage to pull through ( s’en sortr