Bonjour à tous

Sujet du devoir

Alors, j'ai réalisé un devoir d'anglais assez long.
Voici le sujet : "vous écrivez à un journal, vous vous présentez et vous leur racontez pourquoi vous n'avez pas eu un trvail en précisant que c'est parceque vous êtes une femme "

Vous verrez que j'ai posté plusieurs fois le même sujet, mais c'est que j'ai découpé le texte car il est très long.

Good morning. I am one of your assiduous readers and I really wanted to speak to you about a very important subject, the reason why I write you.
To begin, let me introduce myself, my name is Eliza Tenneb and I am thirty, I am married but I haven’t got any children. I studied at Harvard for five years to be a lawyer, I am able to speak three languages currently and I have already worked as a lawyer in an office in Manchester. But I have quit this job because I missed London (where my family lives) and my husband got a well-paid job in London, so we moved house and I was sure I would found a job quickly, lawyers are very requested.
So, two weeks ago, I decided to apply for a job in a lawyers ‘study quite famous. Of course, I took my CV and my application letter, I really wanted to have this job, I have been in London since one month and do nothing was quite boring, days seem to be very long when you send your time on tidying all the things, the clothes you took for your new house. My job interview was at nine. When I arrived, I saw a dozen of persons who were waiting for their interview. Strangely, there were only two women, but at the beginning I didn’t care about that. It was my turn, I came in the room, the man in front of me smiled and asked me to sit. He started asking me about my CV, my experiences and why I resigned. He looked like quite happy and he even told me that I was the best person he has ever seen in the morning. At this moment, he wondered me a very strange thing : “You are married, aren’t you ?" “Yes” I replied, quite intrigued, I didn’t know why he told me that. “And, do you want to have children within four years ?” “I don’t want to have children now, but when I have a job and when we earn a living, we would like to have children with my husband.” I answered. “Hmm” he just said. And, it’s at this moment that I understood that I would have never said that. He stood, he told me he had to meet the others candidates to make an opinion. As you guess, I didn’t have the job.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

J'ai déjà fait tout le texte (pas de traducteur), j'ai juste besoin d'une vérification grammaticale.
Merci.