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Alors, j'ai réalisé un devoir d'anglais assez long.Voici le sujet : "vous écrivez à un journal, vous vous présentez et vous leur racontez pourquoi vous n'avez pas eu un trvail en précisant que c'est parceque vous êtes une femme "
Vous verrez que j'ai posté plusieurs fois le même sujet, mais c'est que j'ai découpé le texte car il est très long.
This is what I wrote you, to testify, don’t talk to women about equality ! It’s totally false, there was and there still is a gender gap. Why did they no hire me ?
Because I am a woman ! Maybe he thinks I couldn’t work as a lawyer or I wasn’t able to have a job in his famous study because I want to have children later ? I don’t know but I am sure that there was a discrimination. This is very stupid to don’t hire a person because she is a woman, what do employers think ? Children take off neurons of their mothers ? In what time are we living ? It’s not because I am a woman that I have less qualifications ! It’s not because I am a woman that I must stay with my children all the time. Since ninety years we can work, we don’t have to be a housewife. Fathers can care about their kids as well as mothers. They can stay with them when they are sick. Obviously, they can’t have a maternity leave ! But what is the problem with pregnancies ? Employers have to hire an another person, but we come back ! It’s not a betrayal to have children !
Finally, if I were you men (some of them, not all), I would think about what you are like that, uncompromising and disdainful. Is it because you are afraid of the intelligence and the qualities of a women that you don’t want to see them working with you ?
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
J'ai déjà fait tout le texte (pas de traducteur), j'ai juste besoin d'une vérification grammaticale.Merci.
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Merci
Je vois ke ta quelques erreurs gramaticales :
"This is what I wrote TO you, to testify, don’t talk to women about equality! It’s totally false, there was and there still is a gender gap. Why did they NOT hire me?
Because I am a woman! Maybe he thinks I couldn’t work as a lawyer or I wasn’t able to have a job in his famous study because I want to have children later? I don’t know but I am sure that there was a discrimination. This is very stupid to NOT hire a person because she is a woman, what do employers think? Children take off neurons of their mothers? In what time are we living? It’s not because I am a woman that I have less qualifications! It’s not because I am a woman that I must stay with my children all the time. Since ninety years we can work, we don’t have to be a housewife. Fathers can care about their kids as well as mothers. They can stay with them when they are sick. Obviously, they can’t have a maternity leave! But what is the problem with pregnancies? Employers have to hire an another person, but we come back! It’s not a betrayal to have children!
Finally, if I were you men (some of them, not all), I would think about what you are like that, uncompromising and disdainful. Is it because you are afraid of the intelligence and the qualities of a WOMAN that you don’t want to see them working with you?"
Jaurais bien aimé te les mettre en gras mais cété mon seul moyen les majuscules :S
Sil te plait est ce que je px te demander un service ... Je vois ke ta un plus devant lhistoire est ce que tu px maider pour ma composition ... Je veux juste les sous parties Merci d'avance.
"This is what I wrote TO you, to testify, don’t talk to women about equality! It’s totally false, there was and there still is a gender gap. Why did they NOT hire me?
Because I am a woman! Maybe he thinks I couldn’t work as a lawyer or I wasn’t able to have a job in his famous study because I want to have children later? I don’t know but I am sure that there was a discrimination. This is very stupid to NOT hire a person because she is a woman, what do employers think? Children take off neurons of their mothers? In what time are we living? It’s not because I am a woman that I have less qualifications! It’s not because I am a woman that I must stay with my children all the time. Since ninety years we can work, we don’t have to be a housewife. Fathers can care about their kids as well as mothers. They can stay with them when they are sick. Obviously, they can’t have a maternity leave! But what is the problem with pregnancies? Employers have to hire an another person, but we come back! It’s not a betrayal to have children!
Finally, if I were you men (some of them, not all), I would think about what you are like that, uncompromising and disdainful. Is it because you are afraid of the intelligence and the qualities of a WOMAN that you don’t want to see them working with you?"
Jaurais bien aimé te les mettre en gras mais cété mon seul moyen les majuscules :S
Sil te plait est ce que je px te demander un service ... Je vois ke ta un plus devant lhistoire est ce que tu px maider pour ma composition ... Je veux juste les sous parties Merci d'avance.
Derien ^^
j'aurai besoin de chickenmanben95 qui me sembe fort en anglais pour un devoir d'anglais stp vraiment besoins d'aide merci
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Voici les corrections apportées a ton devoir:
"This is what I wrote TO you, to testify, don’t talk to women about equality! It’s totally false, there was and there still is a gender gap. Why did they NOT hire me?
Because I am a woman! Maybe he thinks I couldn’t work as a lawyer or I wasn’t able to have a job in his famous study because I want to have children later? I don’t know but I am sure that there was a discrimination. This is very stupid to NOT hire a person because she is a woman, what do employers think? Children take off neurons of their mothers? In what time are we living? It’s not because I am a woman that I have less qualifications! It’s not because I am a woman that I must stay with my children all the time. Since ninety years we can work, we don’t have to be a housewife. Fathers can care about their kids as well as mothers. They can stay with them when they are sick. Obviously, they can’t have a maternity leave! But what is the problem with pregnancies? Employers have to hire an another person, but we come back! It’s not a betrayal to have children!
Finally, if I were you men (some of them, not all), I would think about what you are like that, uncompromising and disdainful. Is it because you are afraid of the intelligence and the qualities of a WOMAN that you don’t want to see them working with you?"
WOMAN = Singulier
WOMEN = Pluriel
MAN = Singulier
MEN = Pluriel
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème