comprehension ecrite ( faire un dialogue )

Publié le 1 juin 2012 il y a 11A par Anonyme - Fin › 5 juin 2012 dans 11A
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Sujet du devoir

after watching a commercial on tv a teenager tries to convaince his father to buy a minivan write drawn the conversation .

je dois faire un dialogue entre un enfant et sont père , il essai de le convaincre a acheter un monospace .
S'il vous plait vous pouvez m'aider en me disant ce qui va pas dedans et a me corriger les faute d'orthographe .

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

dany: hello dad
dad : hi dany how are you?
DANY: fine and you ?
dad : i'm fine
DANY: dad , you know i was still watching tv and there was an advertisement for the minivan and it looks great . why we do not buy one ?
Dad : oh yeah ? this is what brand ?
DANY: the brand is dacia
dad : i do not know if will have enough money , but it was already a car
DANY: yes a know dad , but he car we have and small and we go all in because there is four childern .
DAD: yes it's true.

DANY: in addition there is no family outing together because we can not all go in the same car.

DAD: oh yes it's true my son , and this make me very sick to my heart. what are his options ?

DANY: in the minivan there DVD player with foldaway screen not to be bored during the holiday road . the passenger seat are larger and more comfortable with a colour satellite navigation systeme . the minivan is highly secure because it has airbag and silding door and has seven spot.

DAD : oh cool , it's heavy even when , i would speak to your mother and i think well take a credit for to buy minivan . what is the price ?
DANY: it is 9000 dollard.

Dad : it's cheap it's going



2 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 2 juin 2012
dany: Hello dad
dad : Hi dany how are you?
DANY: fine and you ?
dad : i'm fine
DANY: dad , you know I have just watched tv and there was a commercial about a minivan and it looked great . Why don't we buy one ?
Dad : Really? What was the carbrand ?
DANY: the brand is dacia
dad : i do not know if I will have enough money to afford a minivan , and we already have a car. We don't need another one!
DANY: I know dad , but the car we have is small and we need a bigger one because we are four children and we don't fit in the current one!
DAD: yes you are right!

DANY: in addition we can go out all together because we can not all go in the same car.

DAD: oh yes you are right my son , and this make me sad you know. what are the options offered by the dacia ?

DANY: in the minivan there is a DVD player with foldaway screen in order not to be bored during the holiday road . the passenger seats are larger and more comfortable with a colour satellite navigation systeme . the minivan is highly secure because it has airbag and sliding door and has seven spots?

DAD : oh cool ,it seems to be a good deal, i would talk to your mother about it and we will make the decision.
i think I will need a loan to buy the minivan . what is the price ?
DANY: it is 9000 dollars.
Dad: It's very cheap! Wait until I talk to your mum then we will go and buy it!
Anonyme
Posté le 2 juin 2012
car brand (espace entre les deux)

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