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Publié le 17 oct. 2017 il y a 6A par Anonyme - Fin › 19 oct. 2017 dans 6A
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Voici le texte que l'on m'a donné je dois essayer de comprendre globalement avec des détails ce texte mais moi qui suis très nulle en anglais je n'arrive pas comprendre certaine chose

 

LOS ANGELES — They lean unsteadily on canes and walkers, or roll along the sidewalks of Skid Row here in beat-up wheelchairs, past soiled sleeping bags, swaying tents and piles of garbage. They wander the streets in tattered winter coats, even in the warmth of spring. They worry about the illnesses of age and how they will approach death without the help of children who long ago drifted from their lives.
“It’s hard when you get older,” said Ken Sylvas, 65, who has struggled with alcoholism and has not worked since he was fired in 2001 from a meatpacking job. “I’m in this wheelchair. I had a seizure and was in a convalescent home for two months. I just ride the bus back and forth all night.”
The homeless in America are getting old.
There were 306,000 people over 50 living on the streets in 2014, the most recent data available, a 20 percent jump since 2007, according to the Department of Housing and Urban Development. They now make up 31 percent of the nation’s homeless population.
But it is the emergence of an older homeless population that is creating daunting challenges for social service agencies and governments already struggling with this crisis of poverty. “Baby boomers have health and vulnerability issues that are hard to tend to while living in the streets,” said Alice Callaghan, an Episcopal priest who has spent 35 years working with the homeless in Los Angeles.

Many older homeless people have been on the streets for almost a generation, analysts say, a legacy of the recessions of the late 1970s and early 1980s, federal housing cutbacks and an epidemic of crack cocaine. They bring with them a complicated history that may include a journey from prison to mental health clinic to rehabilitation center and back to the sidewalks.
Some are more recent arrivals and have been forced — at a time of life when some people their age are debating whether to retire to Arizona or to Florida — to learn the ways of homelessness after losing jobs in the latest economic downturn. And there are some on a fixed income who cannot afford the rent in places like Los Angeles, which has a vacany rate of less than 3 percent.

Horace Allong, 60, said he could not afford a one-room apartment and lives in a tent on Crocker Street. Mr. Allong, who divorced his wife and left New Orleans for Los Angeles two years ago, said he lost his wallet and all of his identification two weeks after he arrived and has not been able to find a job.
“It’s the first time I’ve been on the streets, so I’m learning,” he said. “There’s nothing like Skid Row. Skid Row is another world.”
But homelessness is rising in big cities where gentrification is on the march and housing costs are rising, like Los Angeles, New York, Honolulu and San Francisco. Los Angeles reported a 5.7 percent increase in its homeless population last year, the second year in a row it had recorded a jump. More than 20 percent of the nation’s homeless lived in California last year, according to the housing agency.
Across Southern California, the homeless live in tent encampments clustered on corners from Venice to the San Fernando Valley, and in communities sprouting under highway overpasses or in the dry bed of the Los Angeles River. Their sleeping bags and piles of belongings line sidewalks on Santa Monica Boulevard.

Along with these visible signs of homelessness come complaints about aggressive panhandling, public urination and disorderly conduct, as well as a rise in drug dealing and petty crimes.
This is a fluid population, defying precise count or categorization. Some might enjoy a stretch of stability, holding down a job for a while or finding a spare bed with a friend. But more than anything, these are men and women who, as they enter old age, have settled into patterns they seem unwilling, or unable, to break.
Sylvia Welker is 70, but she maneuvers her electric wheelchair around the obstacles of her world — the lurches in the buckling sidewalks, the sharp curb drop on Crocker Street, the piles of clothes on the pavement, the tourists rushing through Skid Row on the way to the Arts District — with confidence and precision.
For Ms. Welker, who has been divorced and on her own since 1981, this is the latest stop in a tumultuous journey. She lived in Lancaster, in California’s high desert, until she was evicted about five years ago, unable to pay the rent. She tried to sleep on the streets, shivering on the sidewalks at night, until she finally pleaded for a room in the home of a daughter. “I told my daughter I’m not going to make it because of my handicap,” she said, referring to her right leg, which she said she almost lost after she was hit by a car.
Her daughter put her up for a few years, but Ms. Welker said she eventually left, ending up on Skid Row a year ago. She said she had since lost touch with all three of her children. “They don’t even know how to reach me,” she said. “They are probably going nuts. I didn’t want to interfere with their lives.”
Ms. Welker, chatty with a wide smile and white flowing hair that falls over her shoulders, has her routines. She knows the staggered schedules of the soup kitchens. Her bad leg and wheelchair usually entitle her to a spot at the front of the line, and she brings a plastic baggie to collect extra food to pass on to friends on the streets, or to eat when she returns to her room.
She passes the days riding her wheelchair, waiting for the battery to run down so she can return to her room and charge it up for the next day.
The challenges faced by people like Ms. Welker have forced advocates for the homeless and government agencies to reconsider what kinds of services they need: It is not just a meal, a roof and rehabilitation anymore.
“The programs for baby boomers are designed to address longstanding programs — mental health, substance abuse,” said Benjamin Henwood, an assistant professor at the University of Southern California School of Social Work. “But they are not designed to address the problems of aging, and that is a big problem for homeless treatment in the years ahead.”
By then it might be too late. Experts say the average life span for a homeless person living on the street is 64 years.
Many manage as best they can, living outside and maneuvering around the drug dealing, random stabbings and shootings, and crackdowns by the police.
It is not the older homeless people whom experts worry about. It is the younger ones, who are slowly changing the makeup of this world.
There were 235,000 homeless Americans between 18 and 30 in 2014, making up 24 percent of the nation’s homeless population. That was up from 226,000 in 2007, when the age group made up 20 percent of the total homeless population, according to the Department of Housing and Urban Development

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

De ce que j'ai compris du texte c'est 

il y a des clochards dans des fauteuils, ils sont dans les rues avec des tentes. Ils qu'inquiètent de leur mort, leur enfants eux non, ils n'ont plus aucune nouvelles de leur enfant. Après une personne témoigne Ken Sylvas lui a lutté contre l'alcoolisme.

une femme n'a plus de jambe elle est dans un fauteuil roulant elle n'a plus aussi de nouvelles de ses enfants et ne savent pas qu'elle est devenu sdf

J'ai essayé de faire un peu de déduction donc je je sais pas si cela est entièrement bon

merci de votre aide et du temps que vous aurez passer à essayer de m'aider




2 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 17 oct. 2017

salut! ton texte est ...........c sur mais il est ps trop dur, il est juste vraiment tres tres long ...........

donc, j ai lu ton texte,  et on comprend tt d abord qu ils parlent de personnes agees sdf qui sont en mauvais etat :

"  They lean unsteadily on canes and walkers (=ils se tiennent maladroitement/non fermement sur leurs cannes et leurs deambulateurs => on comprend qu ils sont ages), or roll along the sidewalks of Skid Row here in beat-up wheelchairs (=ou roulent sur les trottoirs de Skid Row dans des chaises roulantes cabossees => on comprend qu ils seraient handicapes), past soiled sleeping bags, swaying tents and piles of garbage(=sacs de couchage, tentes et bcp de dechets => ils vivent ds la rue) . They wander the streets in tattered winter coats, even in the warmth of spring. They worry about the illnesses of age (= ici on comprend encore qu ils sont vieux) and how they will approach death without the help of children who long ago drifted from their lives."

par la derniere phrase, ils montrent la peur de la mort de ces personnes, et la peur de l oubli, si ils ne sont ps deja oublies. (= comment ils approchent la mort sans l aide de leurs enffants qui sont partis depuis lgtmps de leur vie)

 

ensuite le temoignage du mec, il faut juste comprendre qu il a 65 ans et qu il est en chaise roulante et qu il est desepere (=>“I’m in this wheelchair. I had a seizure and was in a convalescent home for two months. I just ride the bus back and forth all night.” = je prend le bus aller retour tte la nuit... je crois q c est ca qu il veut dire)

 

ensuite ils donnent pleins de data/ infos sur les sdf aux en amerique, plus precisemment probablemnt aux usa

The homeless in America are getting old (= les sans abris en Amerique deviennt ages).
There were 306,000 people over 50 living on the streets in 2014(=306,000 personnes sur 50 vivant ds les rues en 2014) , the most recent data available, a 20 percent jump since 2007 (= une augmentation de 7% depuis 2007), according to the Department of Housing and Urban Development (=selon "the Department of Housing and Urban Development") . They now make up 31 percent of the nation’s homeless population (= ces personnes agees vivant a los angeles font mtn 31% des sans abris du pays).
But it is the emergence of an older homeless population that is creating daunting challenges for social service agencies and governments already struggling with this crisis of poverty ( = mais c est l emergence d une population agee qui cree de gros challenge pour les agences de services sociaux et le gouvernement est deja en lutte contre cette crise de pauvrete). “Baby boomers have health and vulnerability issues that are hard to tend to while living in the streets (= la generation du baby boom a des pbs de sante qui sont durs a traiter lorsque tu vis ds la rue => on comprend donc que ces personnes agees sont enfait issue de cette periode du baby boom),” said Alice Callaghan, an Episcopal priest who has spent 35 years working with the homeless in Los Angeles.

 

 

tout le reste du texte ils bourrent la tete avec des donnees et te donnent des temoignages de personnes agees qui vievent ds la rue a Los Angeles.

il faut aussi noter qu a priori, ce quartier dont ils parlent la, le "Skid Row", c est d apres ce que j ai compris une espece de rue frequentee par des personnes sans abris...

 

deso je traduis pas tt le texte, j ai un gros devoir d svt a faire aussi. mais le debut et les grdes lignes du textes, c de ca que ca relate.

dis si y a des trucs que t as ps compris je peux peut etre t aider. et promis j invente pas tt ce que j ai ecris, .........

j espere que j aurai ete utile!!!!

bonne chaaance!!

 

La vulgarité en moins, ce serait mieux.

La modération

Anonyme
Posté le 17 oct. 2017

Je te remercie infiniment en effet tu m'as bien aider sur certains point et tu m'as éclaircit.

bonne chance pour ton devoir en svt et merci encore à toi d'avoir passer de ton temps à m'aider à comprendre 


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