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Sujet du devoir

"Imagine you are in your house when you heard the Taliban are coming"!Describe with detally!Je n'ai plus d'imagination c'est pour cela que je viens vous demander un peu d'aide, ce serrait vraiment gentil à vous de me venir en aide.
Merci d'avançe.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voilà j'aurais vraiment besoin de votre aide car je suis un peu perdu, je n'ai plus d'imagination!

Voilà ce que j'ai écrit:
The 23 october 1996, i never couldn't forget this day!i would like really that this day never happened ! While i was looking after my little sister, i heard scared noise outside. i go rapidly into the window and i was really shocked: i saw men who have lenghts beards, with a turban, they ware vert scared and they were hiting a woman, they were killing birds ,they were burning books and they were cutting off a child 's hand! At first , i didn't understand who were they and why they were doing that ! But later , i found out that they were fanatic menand that they have imposed their harsh rules in our country. I realize that now, our live will never be like in the past.

Voilà. Pourriez vous m'aider à l'arranger un peu et à me donner quelques idées car je dois avouer que je suis à court d'idées.

Merci d'avançe!