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Je dois crée un texte sur une ado qui doit pousser sa mere a lui laisser son pc et la teléOù j'en suis dans mon devoir
- Hey Mom !- Yes, what's up ?
- Nothing, without could i have a computer ?
- We already talked about it, it's no
- Why ?
- Because you can't not control yourself with an computer in your bedroom
- I would concentrate on my homework, it's promise !
- We'll see when you have better results
- you say, the news on TV are very important
- So ... the tv will be limited for you !
- Oh ! Thanks mom, and for my computer ? without my pc, i couldn't transfer any more my musics on my Ipod
- I know, the day , your computer will stay in my bedroom and when you will get back you will take it
- Thanks you so much mom,
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Bonjour,
les arguments de l'ado ne sont pas super convaincants.
Je corrige et j'ajoute deux-trois trucs:
- Hey Mom !
- Yes, what's up ?
- Nothing, could I have a computer in my room?
- We already talked about it and the answer is no.
- Why ?
- Because you can not control yourself with an computer in your bedroom
- I would concentrate on my homework, I promise !
- We'll see when you have better results at school.
- You say that news on TV are very important. It would be easier to have one on my own, wouldn't it?
- Okay for the tv. But tv time will be restricted !
- Oh ! Thanks mom, and for a computer? Without my pc, I can't transfer my music on my Ipod any more. I'm sure I would be more efficient on my homeworks and personal research with a computer in my bedroom. I'm old enough, I can be trusted.
- Right, however your computer will stay in my bedroom and when you get back from school you may take it. And you must return it before 10pm. Is that fair enough?
- Yes. Thanks you so much mom.
=> j'ai rajouté:
-Il serait plus simple d'avoir ma propre télé n'est-ce pas?
-D'accord pour la télé. Mais le temps de télé sera limité.
-Je suis sur que je serais plus efficace dans mes devoirs et mon travail personnel avec un ordinateur dans ma chambre. Je suis grand, je suis digne de confiance.
- (...). Et tu dois le remettre avant 22h. Cela te parait juste?
- oui
Donc l'ado a eu ce qu'il voulait mais la mère a mis des conditions.
Arguments: l'âge, la confiance, le travail à l'école, le respect des règles établies.
Cela te convient-il?
les arguments de l'ado ne sont pas super convaincants.
Je corrige et j'ajoute deux-trois trucs:
- Hey Mom !
- Yes, what's up ?
- Nothing, could I have a computer in my room?
- We already talked about it and the answer is no.
- Why ?
- Because you can not control yourself with an computer in your bedroom
- I would concentrate on my homework, I promise !
- We'll see when you have better results at school.
- You say that news on TV are very important. It would be easier to have one on my own, wouldn't it?
- Okay for the tv. But tv time will be restricted !
- Oh ! Thanks mom, and for a computer? Without my pc, I can't transfer my music on my Ipod any more. I'm sure I would be more efficient on my homeworks and personal research with a computer in my bedroom. I'm old enough, I can be trusted.
- Right, however your computer will stay in my bedroom and when you get back from school you may take it. And you must return it before 10pm. Is that fair enough?
- Yes. Thanks you so much mom.
=> j'ai rajouté:
-Il serait plus simple d'avoir ma propre télé n'est-ce pas?
-D'accord pour la télé. Mais le temps de télé sera limité.
-Je suis sur que je serais plus efficace dans mes devoirs et mon travail personnel avec un ordinateur dans ma chambre. Je suis grand, je suis digne de confiance.
- (...). Et tu dois le remettre avant 22h. Cela te parait juste?
- oui
Donc l'ado a eu ce qu'il voulait mais la mère a mis des conditions.
Arguments: l'âge, la confiance, le travail à l'école, le respect des règles établies.
Cela te convient-il?
Oui merci beaucoup de ton aide :D
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