- Partage ce devoir avec tes amis !
Sujet du devoir
Nandira : - "It's me papa,I'm home now"Mr.Patel: - "hello Nandira.Well it was funny out ?"( tu t'es bien amusée dehors ?)
Nandira (hesitating): - " Huuum ,No.Because I was walking in the street when I noticed a woman who was following me."
Mr.Patel (frowning): "A woman !? are you sure ? But why did she follow you ?"
Nandira : "Ah ah ! precisely it's the question that I would have ask you .But as I'am a curious girl,I asked her and she replied me that her names was Mma Ramotwe and that she was a private detective engaged from you ! "
Mr patel (surprised):" Yes It's right, I engaged a private detective to find out whether you had a boyfriend. Because I'm scrared for you.You could meet a bad boys and they could hurt you." ( tu pourrais tomber sur des voyous et ils pourraient te faire du mal )
Nandira (angry): Dady, you are too stristest with me.I would like to have more freedom.I'am fed up with you pry into my private life.The Harini's parents (nandira's friend) aren't as much hardly with her.Please give me more self-relient.I thrink that i'm enough mature to know who I have to meet. (qui je dois fréquenter)
Nandira's mother: "Yes ,I think that nandira is right .We should give her more freedom.She's a teenager and we talk to her as if she was a baby."
Mr.Patel (sighed):"Okay Nandira I'm right to give you more freedom but you know if mam and me we overprotecd you it's because we love you, and we don't want qu'il t'arrive quelquechose. Anyway now we will try to consider like a real teenager."
Nandira (happy): "Thank you very much ."
Merci d'avance de votre aide
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
dite moi si c'est bon ceux devoir est a rendre a la rentree merci d'avance je crois que c'est pas tellement sa16 commentaires pour ce devoir
tu est en 6e et tu connais tout ca merci pour ton aide
kil t'arrive quelque chose = you to get into trouble
à la place de thank you tu devrais mettre "cheers" ça fait plus jeune
c'est bien
à la place de thank you tu devrais mettre "cheers" ça fait plus jeune
c'est bien
merci
line1: hey,N,did you have a good time?
line5: Why was she following you?
line6: I would have asked you.
line 7:she replied that her name was ...
line 8: a private detective and you had hired her.
line10: meet bad boys
line ..: The Harinis aren't that hard on (your friend's name)
line ...: mature enough (=enough suit l'adjectif)
line...: to treat you like a big girl.
line5: Why was she following you?
line6: I would have asked you.
line 7:she replied that her name was ...
line 8: a private detective and you had hired her.
line10: meet bad boys
line ..: The Harinis aren't that hard on (your friend's name)
line ...: mature enough (=enough suit l'adjectif)
line...: to treat you like a big girl.
a l'avant dernière réplique c'est "we wouldn't"
"it's me dad I'm home"
"Hello Nandira! Welle did you have fun aout saide ?"
"Hum,no it wasn't because I noticed a women falowing me dawn the street"
"Realy!Are you shure?But wy did she falow you?
"That is precisley the question I want to ask you.
I'm a curious gril so I asked that women and she tolled me that her name is Ms... and she tolld me that she's a privet detective hierd by you.
"Hello Nandira! Welle did you have fun aout saide ?"
"Hum,no it wasn't because I noticed a women falowing me dawn the street"
"Realy!Are you shure?But wy did she falow you?
"That is precisley the question I want to ask you.
I'm a curious gril so I asked that women and she tolled me that her name is Ms... and she tolld me that she's a privet detective hierd by you.
"nes92 - Exercice - Anglais - le 16/02 19h32 à rendre le 28/02/2012 "
=> pourquoi as-tu mis l'année 2012 ?
Tu penses redoubler ? ^^
Tu as été aidé donc pense à fermer ton devoir. Merci.
=> pourquoi as-tu mis l'année 2012 ?
Tu penses redoubler ? ^^
Tu as été aidé donc pense à fermer ton devoir. Merci.
Bonjour, maintenant que tu as aidé, il serait bon de fermer ton devoir! Surtout que le 28 février 2012 c'est dans longtemps!!
Très bon devoir malgré plusieurs fautes d'orthographe et de vocabulaire. si tu m'envoies ton addresse mail je pourrai te le corriger entièrement et te traduire la partie manquante. De plus t'auras une bonne note si tu me fais confiance car je suis bilingue.
Quand tu dis "But why did she follow you" remplace "follow" par "followed" . Ensuite quand tu dis "because i'm scared for you" remplace "scared" par "worried" qui veut dire inquiet. ensuite tu as mis "stristest" sa veut dire quoi ? (si c'est pour dire trop stricte , met seulement "strict") et pour finir a la fin tu met ; Okay Nandira I'm right to give you more freedom but you know if mam and me we overprotected you it's because we love you, and we don't want qu'il t'arrive quelquechose. Anyway now we will try to consider you like a real teenager." J'ai juste changer une ou deux phrases et corriger une faute, relis toi bien avant d'écrire car il y'a aussi quelques fautes de frappe que tu verras par toi même. En espérant t'avoir aider.
Nandira : - "It's me daddy,I'm home now"
Mr.Patel: - "hello Nandira.Did you have fun out ?"( tu t'es bien amusée dehors ?)
Nandira (hesitating): - " Huuum ,No. Because I was walking in the street when I noticed a woman was following me."
Mr.Patel (frowning): "A woman !? are you sure ? But why was she folloing (pas sur que sa s'écris comme sa) you ?"
Nandira : "Ah ah ! precisely it's the question that I would have ask you .But as I'am a curious girl,I asked her and she replied that her name was Mm Ramotwe and that she was a private detective engaged by you ! "
Mr patel (surprised):" Yes It's right, I engaged a private detective to find out whether you had a boyfriend. Because I'm scrared for you.You could meet a bad boy and they could hurt you." ( tu pourrais tomber sur des voyous et ils pourraient te faire du mal )
Nandira (angry): Daddy, you are too stricked with me.I would like to have more freedom.I am fed up with you looking into my private life. The Harini's parents (nandira's friend) aren't like that with her.Please give me more self-relient.I think that i'm mature enough to know who I have to meet. (qui je dois fréquenter)
Nandira's mother: "Yes ,I think that nandira is right .We should give her more freedom.She's a teenager and we talk to her as if she was a baby."
Mr.Patel (sighed):"Okay Nandira I'm ok to give you more freedom but you know if mum and me we overprotected you it's because we love you, and we don't want anything to happen to you. Anyway now we will try to consider you like a real teenager."
Nandira (happy): "Thank you very much ."
Mr.Patel: - "hello Nandira.Did you have fun out ?"( tu t'es bien amusée dehors ?)
Nandira (hesitating): - " Huuum ,No. Because I was walking in the street when I noticed a woman was following me."
Mr.Patel (frowning): "A woman !? are you sure ? But why was she folloing (pas sur que sa s'écris comme sa) you ?"
Nandira : "Ah ah ! precisely it's the question that I would have ask you .But as I'am a curious girl,I asked her and she replied that her name was Mm Ramotwe and that she was a private detective engaged by you ! "
Mr patel (surprised):" Yes It's right, I engaged a private detective to find out whether you had a boyfriend. Because I'm scrared for you.You could meet a bad boy and they could hurt you." ( tu pourrais tomber sur des voyous et ils pourraient te faire du mal )
Nandira (angry): Daddy, you are too stricked with me.I would like to have more freedom.I am fed up with you looking into my private life. The Harini's parents (nandira's friend) aren't like that with her.Please give me more self-relient.I think that i'm mature enough to know who I have to meet. (qui je dois fréquenter)
Nandira's mother: "Yes ,I think that nandira is right .We should give her more freedom.She's a teenager and we talk to her as if she was a baby."
Mr.Patel (sighed):"Okay Nandira I'm ok to give you more freedom but you know if mum and me we overprotected you it's because we love you, and we don't want anything to happen to you. Anyway now we will try to consider you like a real teenager."
Nandira (happy): "Thank you very much ."
cool
vpppppp
Nanda: - "It's me Dad, I'm home now"
Mr.Patel: - "It Was funny hello Nandira.Well out?" (Did you have fun outside?)
Nanda (Hesitating): - "Huuum, No. Because I WAS walking in the street When I Noticed A Woman Who Was Following Me."
Mr.Patel (frowning): "A woman!? Are you sure? Purpose Why Did she follow you?"
Nanda: "Aha! PRECISELY it's the matter That I Would Have ask you. I'am Purpose as a curious girl, I Asked Her and she Replied Me That Her names and WAS Mma Ramotwe That She Was Engaged a private detective from you! "
Mr patel (surprised): "Yes It's right, I was Engaged private detective to find out whether you HAD a boyfriend. Because I'm worried for you.You Could Meet a bad boys and THEY Could Hurt You." (You could fall on thugs and they might hurt you)
Nanda (angry): Dady, you are too striste with me. I Would Like to Have More liberter.J 'is fed up with my parents in my search vie.The Harini's parents (Nanda's friend) Are not As Much Hardly With Her . Please give me more self-relient.I thrink That I'm mature Enough to Know Who I Have to meet. (which I attend)
Nanda's mother: "Yes, I think nanda That is Right. We Should Give Her more freedom.C is a teenager and we talk to Her as If She Was a baby."
Mr.Patel (sighed): "Okay I'm right Nanda to Give you more freedom goal if you know mam and me it's you we overprotecd Because we love you, and we do not want something to happen to you. Anyway We Will now try to Consider like a real teenager. "
Nanda (happy): "Thank you very much."
Je t'es corriger ceux qui allez pas sauf pour ce que je n'est pas compris j'ai laissez tel qu'elle. As tu ta version française?
Mr.Patel: - "It Was funny hello Nandira.Well out?" (Did you have fun outside?)
Nanda (Hesitating): - "Huuum, No. Because I WAS walking in the street When I Noticed A Woman Who Was Following Me."
Mr.Patel (frowning): "A woman!? Are you sure? Purpose Why Did she follow you?"
Nanda: "Aha! PRECISELY it's the matter That I Would Have ask you. I'am Purpose as a curious girl, I Asked Her and she Replied Me That Her names and WAS Mma Ramotwe That She Was Engaged a private detective from you! "
Mr patel (surprised): "Yes It's right, I was Engaged private detective to find out whether you HAD a boyfriend. Because I'm worried for you.You Could Meet a bad boys and THEY Could Hurt You." (You could fall on thugs and they might hurt you)
Nanda (angry): Dady, you are too striste with me. I Would Like to Have More liberter.J 'is fed up with my parents in my search vie.The Harini's parents (Nanda's friend) Are not As Much Hardly With Her . Please give me more self-relient.I thrink That I'm mature Enough to Know Who I Have to meet. (which I attend)
Nanda's mother: "Yes, I think nanda That is Right. We Should Give Her more freedom.C is a teenager and we talk to Her as If She Was a baby."
Mr.Patel (sighed): "Okay I'm right Nanda to Give you more freedom goal if you know mam and me it's you we overprotecd Because we love you, and we do not want something to happen to you. Anyway We Will now try to Consider like a real teenager. "
Nanda (happy): "Thank you very much."
Je t'es corriger ceux qui allez pas sauf pour ce que je n'est pas compris j'ai laissez tel qu'elle. As tu ta version française?
Nandira : - "It's me daddy,I'm back"
Mr.Patel: - "hello Nandira.Well did you have fun going out ?"( tu t'es bien amusée dehors ?)
Nandira (hesitating): - " Huuum ,No.Because I was walking in the street when I noticed a woman who was following me."
Mr.Patel (frowning): "A woman !? are you sure ? But why was she following you ?"
Nandira : "Ah ah ! That's the very question I would like to ask you .But as I am a curious girl,I asked her and she replied me that her names was Mma Ramotwe and that she was a private detective that you had engaged ! "
Mr patel (surprised):" Yes that's true I engaged a private detective to find out whether you had a boyfriend. Because I'm scared for you.You could meet hoodies and they could hurt you." ( tu pourrais tomber sur des voyous et ils pourraient te faire du mal )
Nandira (angry): Daddy, you are too strict with me.I would like to have more freedom.I'am fed up with you prying into my private life.The Harini's parents (nandira's friend) aren't as much hard with her.Please give me more autonomy (self reliance = auto suffisance).I think i'm enough mature to know who I have to see. (qui je dois fréquenter)
Nandira's mother: "Yes ,I think that nandira is right .We should give her more freedom.She's a teenager and we talk to her as if she was a baby."
Mr.Patel (sighed):"Okay Nandira I accept to give you more freedom but you know if mum and me we overprotect you it's because we love you, and we don't want you to get into trouble. Anyway now we will try to consider you like a real teenager."
Mr.Patel: - "hello Nandira.Well did you have fun going out ?"( tu t'es bien amusée dehors ?)
Nandira (hesitating): - " Huuum ,No.Because I was walking in the street when I noticed a woman who was following me."
Mr.Patel (frowning): "A woman !? are you sure ? But why was she following you ?"
Nandira : "Ah ah ! That's the very question I would like to ask you .But as I am a curious girl,I asked her and she replied me that her names was Mma Ramotwe and that she was a private detective that you had engaged ! "
Mr patel (surprised):" Yes that's true I engaged a private detective to find out whether you had a boyfriend. Because I'm scared for you.You could meet hoodies and they could hurt you." ( tu pourrais tomber sur des voyous et ils pourraient te faire du mal )
Nandira (angry): Daddy, you are too strict with me.I would like to have more freedom.I'am fed up with you prying into my private life.The Harini's parents (nandira's friend) aren't as much hard with her.Please give me more autonomy (self reliance = auto suffisance).I think i'm enough mature to know who I have to see. (qui je dois fréquenter)
Nandira's mother: "Yes ,I think that nandira is right .We should give her more freedom.She's a teenager and we talk to her as if she was a baby."
Mr.Patel (sighed):"Okay Nandira I accept to give you more freedom but you know if mum and me we overprotect you it's because we love you, and we don't want you to get into trouble. Anyway now we will try to consider you like a real teenager."
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
- Aucun devoir trouvé, poste ton devoir maintenant.