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faire une rédaction en anglais de 200 mots sur un meurtre qui doit étre au prétérit et à la 3éme personne du pluriel.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
The murder of mayoron friday morning will take place elections to elect the new mayor of the city.But one of the candidates, one who was loved by peapole was killed.
The professor Helmer will investigate to find the murderer because he was the best friend of the victime.He suspects John Goodface because also wanted be mayor of the city.
Monday morning the professor Helmer decided to watch over John Goodface.
He knows his practices, then he hided in a building to observe the suspect. he used hi magnifiying glasses to see more.
While, John Goodface was in the parf car with a man. They exchanged a suite case. the doubs's professor confirmed. It seems that John Goodface rewards his accomplice. Suddenly he noticed another man dressed as an electrician which seems to be preparing something stange.
All of suddenly the professor Helmer understood that man want to detonate a bomb.Then, he realized that John goodface han nothing have wih urder of his friend becase he too somebody would want his death.He rushed instectively to a car park in order to prevent another murder. Amazed john does not understand what takes place.The professor went to Mr Goodface's car very fast.He tried to save him but the car explodes and the two men were ejected.They die.Police seized of the case but it was never resolved.
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Bonjour Enirsen,
Voici la correction de ton texte:
"The murder of mayor.
On Friday morning will take place elections to elect the new mayor of the city. But one of the candidates, one who was loved by people was killed.
The professor Helmer will investigate to find the murderer because he was the best friend of the victim.He suspects John Goodface because also wanted be mayor of the city.
Monday morning the professor Helmer decided to watch over John Goodface.
He knows his practices, then he hide in a building to observe the suspect. he used his magnifying glasses to see more.
While, John Goodface was in the car park with a man. They exchanged a suite case. the doubs's professor confirmed. It seems that John Goodface rewards his accomplice. Suddenly he noticed another man dressed as an electrician which seems to be preparing something strange.
All of a sudden the professor Helmer understood that man want to detonate a bomb. Then, he realised that John Goodface had nothing have with murder of his friend because he too somebody would want his death. He rushed instinctively to a car park in order to prevent another murder. Amazed John does not understand what takes place. The professor went to Mr Goodface's car very fast. He tried to save him but the car explodes and the two men were ejected.They die.Police seized of the case but it was never resolved."
Oh, et je n'ai que corrigé quelques fautes et surtout la sructure de ton texte. Relit le texte et corrige le... Tu la traduit sur reverso je pense...
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Voici la correction de ton texte:
"The murder of mayor.
On Friday morning will take place elections to elect the new mayor of the city. But one of the candidates, one who was loved by people was killed.
The professor Helmer will investigate to find the murderer because he was the best friend of the victim.He suspects John Goodface because also wanted be mayor of the city.
Monday morning the professor Helmer decided to watch over John Goodface.
He knows his practices, then he hide in a building to observe the suspect. he used his magnifying glasses to see more.
While, John Goodface was in the car park with a man. They exchanged a suite case. the doubs's professor confirmed. It seems that John Goodface rewards his accomplice. Suddenly he noticed another man dressed as an electrician which seems to be preparing something strange.
All of a sudden the professor Helmer understood that man want to detonate a bomb. Then, he realised that John Goodface had nothing have with murder of his friend because he too somebody would want his death. He rushed instinctively to a car park in order to prevent another murder. Amazed John does not understand what takes place. The professor went to Mr Goodface's car very fast. He tried to save him but the car explodes and the two men were ejected.They die.Police seized of the case but it was never resolved."
Oh, et je n'ai que corrigé quelques fautes et surtout la sructure de ton texte. Relit le texte et corrige le... Tu la traduit sur reverso je pense...
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Bonjour
- (ligne 3): Ce n'est pas peapole mais " People"
- (ligne 3): Ce n'est pas peapole mais " People"
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
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Relis deja son texte, il y plein de verbes qui sont au futur et au present, fais attention. Relis, je suis sure que tu trouveras certaine fautes seule... ensuite je t'aiderai. =)