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Sujet du devoir
You are the representative for the i-kid phone company. Your company hasdesigned a new mobile phone for kids. You are on the phone and you want to persuade Mr Smith, the manager of another firm to adopt and sell this product in his country. Write the dialogue. You will present your arguments and Mr Smith’s reactions and counter-arguments. (200 words)
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
J'ai commencé, mais auriez-vous des idées.Pourriez-vous aussi me corriger les fautes, svp?
L'anglais n'est pas mon fort.
- Hello
- Goodmorning, Mr Smith. It's Mary, the representative for the i-kid phone compagny.
- Goodmorning. Can I help you?
- Yes. My compagny has designed a nex phone mobile for kids.
- Well, and what do I doing?
- Can you adopt and selling this product?
- Yes, but what are its avantages?
- It's very pratice. It's also, cheaper than the last.
Voilà déjà un petit début.
Auriez-vous des suggestions à faire?
Ce serait gentil si vous pouviez m'aider.
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"- Yes. My compagny has designed a new phone mobile for kids."
Apres j'aurai plutôt mis "Can you tell me more about the new GSM for kids ?"
Apres j'aurai plutôt mis "Can you tell me more about the new GSM for kids ?"
Oui, c'est vrai.
Attends, je vais aller voir.
Mais, pour l'anglais, il ne faut pas faire d'abord le texte en français puis traduire. C'est mieux si je le fais directement en anglais.
Merci quand même pour tes suggestions.
Mais, pour l'anglais, il ne faut pas faire d'abord le texte en français puis traduire. C'est mieux si je le fais directement en anglais.
Merci quand même pour tes suggestions.
Voilà une deuxième solution de début en améliorant un peu la tienne niveau expression ^^ :
-Hello
-Good morning mr Smith . My name is mary and i'm the i-kid phone compagny representative .
-Euh , goddmorning. Can i help you ?
-Yes . I want to talk with you about the new phone mobile for kids of my company .
-Well , what can i do?
-Can you adopt and selling this product?
-Yes, maybe. Can yu explain me what's this project ?
Et à partir de la tu expliques quel est le projet et tu fais une sorte de question réponse entre Smith et toi par rapport au téléphone
-Hello
-Good morning mr Smith . My name is mary and i'm the i-kid phone compagny representative .
-Euh , goddmorning. Can i help you ?
-Yes . I want to talk with you about the new phone mobile for kids of my company .
-Well , what can i do?
-Can you adopt and selling this product?
-Yes, maybe. Can yu explain me what's this project ?
Et à partir de la tu expliques quel est le projet et tu fais une sorte de question réponse entre Smith et toi par rapport au téléphone
Ok. merci.
Je vais essayer de faire tout ca ce soir.
Et je vous dirai ou j'en suis.
Je vais essayer de faire tout ca ce soir.
Et je vous dirai ou j'en suis.
D'accord tiens nous au courant c'est sympa de t'aider ^^
Utilise des mots plus recherché quand MR. Smith parle !
Voici ce que j'ai finalement trouvé. Merci à tous pour vos aides et suggestions.
-Hello
-Good morning mr Smith . My name's Mary. I'm the i-kid phone compagny's representative .
-Good morning. Can I help you ?
-Yes, you can . I want to talk with you about the new phone mobile for kids of my company .
-Well , what can I do?
-Can you adopt and selling this product?
-Yes, maybe. Can you explain me what's this project ?
- It's a new phone mobile conceivede just for kids!
- Yes, but can you tell me more about this novelty? How it is?
- Yes, of course. It's smaller and more beautiful than the last. We have got one more wide selection of this product, more coulours, more forms.
- Yes, but the young kinds don't hav the need to use a phone.
- We conceived it, with games and with special programs for their security.
- Ok, it's interessant. But the waves are bad for youngs.
- Yes, certainly. We joined to it a special machine, in the phone, for limited the waves. The phone has, also, some beautiful and amusing forms for kids, with their heros.
- Yes, that's right. Just one question. How much is it? Is it more expensive than the last?
- No, it's cheaper. And it's guarantee more time.
- That's fine. It's a very good idea! I'm going to make adopted and selling your new product: The new i-kid phone.
- Thank you very much!
- See you!
- Bye!
-Hello
-Good morning mr Smith . My name's Mary. I'm the i-kid phone compagny's representative .
-Good morning. Can I help you ?
-Yes, you can . I want to talk with you about the new phone mobile for kids of my company .
-Well , what can I do?
-Can you adopt and selling this product?
-Yes, maybe. Can you explain me what's this project ?
- It's a new phone mobile conceivede just for kids!
- Yes, but can you tell me more about this novelty? How it is?
- Yes, of course. It's smaller and more beautiful than the last. We have got one more wide selection of this product, more coulours, more forms.
- Yes, but the young kinds don't hav the need to use a phone.
- We conceived it, with games and with special programs for their security.
- Ok, it's interessant. But the waves are bad for youngs.
- Yes, certainly. We joined to it a special machine, in the phone, for limited the waves. The phone has, also, some beautiful and amusing forms for kids, with their heros.
- Yes, that's right. Just one question. How much is it? Is it more expensive than the last?
- No, it's cheaper. And it's guarantee more time.
- That's fine. It's a very good idea! I'm going to make adopted and selling your new product: The new i-kid phone.
- Thank you very much!
- See you!
- Bye!
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrai me dire si il y a encore beaucoup de fautes. Si vous avez des observations à faire, n'hésitez pas.
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ce nouveaux telephone est pratique a quel point ? Les enfants n'ont pas besoin de telephone portable si tu leur donne un ballon ils seront autant content.
Ces dangereux pour la santé avec ces ondes qui se degage des telephone sa peut devenir cancérigene.
Un petit enfant ne sachant ni lire ni ecrire qqu'elle serait l'utilité d'un telephone ?? a par dire tatata a 9 mois leurs langage est restreint donc si tu dévelope ces idée avec tes idée je pense que tu peut atteindre les 200 mots tranquil mais si tu as besoin n'hesite pas tu ces ou me trouver !!!!
Tu peut m'aider pour mon DM de Math stp ???