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During my summer holidays, I went with my family in Spain for visit my uncle. After 150Km in the car, the car broke down, It was terrible i missed one day of my holidays, we went to the hotel and we stayed there for all night. The following day, the car has been repaired. We left france and we went to Spain. Once arrived, we stayed in camping. I was very sad because my friends was not there. One week later my mother has seek !
So my summer holidays was not really exiting.
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Je n'ai pas assez de vocabulaire anglais pour te corriger.
Coucou, à l'avant dernière ligne, je pense que tu as voulu dire que t'a mère était malade...
Tu t'es trompée au lieu d'écrire "My mother was sick" tu as écris "my mother has seek"
During my summer holidays, I went with my family in Spain to visit my uncle. After 150Km in the car, the car broke down, It was terrible i missed one day of my holidays, we went to the hotel and we stayed there for all night. The following day, the car has been repaired. We left france and we went to Spain. Once arrived, we stayed in camping. I was very sad because my friends was not there. One week later my mother feel seek !
So my summer holidays was not really exiting.
Tu peux préciser d'où vous êtes partis
tu peux éliminer "in the car". tu peux aussi préciser les circonstance de l'accident
"in a camping" pas in camping. Tu pourrais peut-être ajouter des détails sur ce camping.
pas "has seek" mais was/ ou has beenseek ( être malade se dit to be seek en anglais")
exciting et non exitig
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Eh bien voilà!!
peut tu me dire si c'est bien ?