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Publié le 25 mars 2010 il y a 14A par Anonyme - Fin › 28 mars 2010 dans 14A
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Sujet du devoir

rediger sur feuille un article sur un acteur et qu'il y ai une fois le plus que parfait et je voudrais savoir si mon devoir a l'air bon
mercie d'avance

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

my favorite star is casey affleck born in 1975 in falmouth in massachussets he played in 1986-88 in Tv series and of 1988 until 200 he played in more than 10 movies casey playins in ocean's eleven in 2001 then in 2001-2006 he had turned in 7 movies casey is acting in assassination pf jasse james by thr coward robert ford he had 3 nomination for best supporting actor



4 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 25 mars 2010
Bonjour,

je te corrige ton texte:

My favorite star is Casey Affleck, born in 1975 in Falmouth in Massachussets. He played in 1986-88 in Tv series and from 1988 until 2000, he played in more than 10 movies. Casey played in ocean's eleven in 2001. Then in 2001-2006 he had turned in 7 movies. Casey is acting the assassination of Jasse James by the coward Robert Ford. He had 3 nominations for best supporting actor.

plus que parfait: had turned, ok

c'est bon!

Anonyme
Posté le 25 mars 2010
oui sa va sa m'a laire correcte essaie de mettre plus de détaille sur lequel il est question de sa voie personnelle
ciao Bn courage
Anonyme
Posté le 25 mars 2010
Hello there!

My favourite actor is Casey Affleck. He was born in Falmouth, Massachussets. From 1986 to 1988, he acted in TV series. Then, from 1998 onwards, he acted in more than 10 movies. In 2001 he took part in "Ocean's Eleven". Then, from 2001 to 2006, he acted in 7 more movies.
In his latest film, Casey Affleck plays the role of the .......( je ne comprends pas la phrase/problème de syntaxe + je n'ai pas vu le film en question - of Jesse James who was murdered by a coward called Robert Ford.
Casey Affleck was nominated three times for best supporting actor.

Good night!
iamjofr
Anonyme
Posté le 25 mars 2010
Hello again!

Sorry pour le plus-que-parfait...

Exemple : Before acting in "Ocean's Eleven", Casey Affleck HAD already TAKEN part in many TV series and films.

Bye for now.
iamjofr

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