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L’enquête sur Jack l’Éventreur,
l’essentiel des éléments du dossier :
Police Report
Criminal Investigation
Inspector Aberline, Scotland Yard.

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Between August and November 1888, five prostitutes are found dead in the bottom areas of London. The first assassination confirms is that of Mary Ann Nichols, discovery scarred and the throat cut in a deadlock on 31 August 1888. The last, that of Mary Kelly, dated November 9 of the same year. The corpse was first examined by Police Constable Henry Lamb and his associate.
The body was brought to the morgue. After further medical examination, it appears that the same weapon was used as in Mary Ann Nichols’s case, and, again, by a left-handed murderer.A witness, an inhabitant of the building, claimed to have heard a woman yelling "no" . The next day, a little girl told the police that she had seen, a few houses further, a puddle of blood: the police declared that it was probably in a trace left by the killer when he overrode the organs of the victim. The killer is a man of the white race of average size or below the average between 20 and 40. He is well dressed, not as a worker or a poor, he is living or has a slot in the corner of white chapel It must possess a medical knowledge the killer is a left-handed it must have a regular job since the murders have all products the weekend
Seven suspects , it is the prince Albert Victor of Wales, heir to the crown of Great Britain, the doctor and surgeon Sir William Gull, painter and artist Walter Sickert, of James Maybrick, from Sir Leslie Melville macnaghten, of Francis J. Tumblety and the Tenant (Wentworth Bell Smith).