correction d'une expression en ANGLAIS

Publié le 16 oct. 2012 il y a 11A par Anonyme - Fin › 23 oct. 2012 dans 11A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour tout le monde pourriez vous corriger mon expression en anglais le sujet est
Imagine you want to organise a tripe to the moon

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

The summer holidays are finaly arrive and I could finaly organize a tripe to the moon with my friend .this trip is thé dream of my life.We start our partener wich is the agency.I ask him many questions:how long is a tripe?
How much does a ticket ?
Will I be able to go out the rocket?
I could see extraterrestrial?
Will I be allowed talk to one of the poeple of the moon?
Will i be able to go play with them ?
I'm exited and stressed for this adventure.






7 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 16 oct. 2012
The summer holydays are finally arrived and I could finally organized atrip to the moon whit my friend. This trip is the dream of my life.
We start our partner which is the agency. I ask him many questions as : How long is this trip ? How much is one ticket ? Will I be able to go out the rocket ? Can we see extraterrestrial ? Will I be allowed to talk to one of the people of the moon ? Will I be able to go to play with them ? I am very exites and stressed for this great adventure.


Voila le texte, bisous et bonne chance
Anonyme
Posté le 16 oct. 2012
a trip to the moom il n'y a pas de e
summer holidays are approaching. So I can finally organize my trip to the moon. I would like my friend to come with me. I have always dreamed of traveling to the moon. So this trip is the dream of my life. I have found an agency that organizes trips to the moon. I have prepared a list of questions for them such as: How much does the fare cost? Will I be able to get out of the rocket? Will I be able to extraterrials? Will I be allowed to talk and play to the people living on the moon?
I am very excited about this trip but I am also very stressed out!
Anonyme
Posté le 17 oct. 2012
Merci miren75 pour ta correction
À bientôt?!!
Anonyme
Posté le 17 oct. 2012
Merci missrochelle312
Anonyme
Posté le 17 oct. 2012
The summer holidays are finaly arrive and I could finaly organize a tripe to the moon with my friend .this trip is the dream of my life.We have chosed our partener wich is the agency.I've asked him many questions:how long is a tripe?
How much does a ticket cost ?
Will I be able to go out a rocket?
I could see extraterrestrial?
Will I be allowed to talk to someone who is on the moon?
Will I be able to go play with them ?
I'm exited and stressed for this adventure.
Anonyme
Posté le 17 oct. 2012
TKT tu peu conter sur moi je suis anglaise

The summer holidays are finaly arrive and I could finaly organize a tripe to the moon with my friend .this trip is the dream of my life.We have chosed our partener wich is the agency.I've asked him many questions:how long is a tripe?
How much does a ticket cost ?
Will I be able to go out a rocket?
I could see extraterrestrial?
Will I be allowed to talk to someone who is on the moon?
Will I be able to go play with them ?
I'm exited and stressed for this adventure.
Anonyme
Posté le 18 oct. 2012
merci prettyannabel



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