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Publié le 4 févr. 2012 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 6 févr. 2012 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Ma prof d'anglais est tres dure et il me faut une bonne traduction , merci beaucoup) : Le projet naît en 1948 sous la forme d'une note interne de Walt Disney. En 1952, il marque une étape avec la création de WED Entreprises, une société dédiée à la conception du parc. Après un an de travaux, et un investissement de 17 millions de $ dollars , le parc est inauguré le samedi 17 juillet 1955 et ouvre au public le lendemain. L'inauguration est retransmise à la télévision dans une émission spéciale nommée Dateline : Disneyland diffusée sur ABC Elle était présentée par Walt Disney et de nombreux acteurs ou personnalités d'Hollywood dont Ronald Reagan, Bobby Driscoll, Frank Sinatra, Sammy Davis Jr. et Fess Parker (Davy Crockett).

Le parc Disneyland en Californie est le premier des parcs Disney, et le seul « royaume enchanté » conçu et vu par Walt Disney.  Walt Disney dut pour le construire emprunter de l'argent en partie à ABC en échange de la production de la fameuse série Disneyland nommée par la suite Wonderful World of Walt Disney.
Le parc a été construit sur une ancienne orangeraie d'Anaheim , dans le comté d'Orange, à une trentaine de kilomètres au sud-est de Los Angeles. C'est le plus petit des royaumes enchantés de Disney. Le parc est surnommé « L'endroit le plus joyeux du monde »

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Sa je le sait il faut marqué sa : « L'endroit le plus joyeux du monde » = Happiest Place on Earth .
Voici ma traduction qui n'es pas très bonne malheuresement :

The project was born in 1948 in the form of an internal memo from Walt Disney. In 1952, a milestone with the creation of WED Enterprises, a company dedicated to the design of the park. After a year of work, and an investment of $ 17 million dollars, the park was inaugurated Saturday, July 17, 1955 and opened to the public the next day. The inauguration was televised in a special program called Dateline: Disneyland It was broadcast on ABC by Walt Disney and many Hollywood actors or personalities including Ronald Reagan, Bobby Driscoll, Frank Sinatra, Sammy Davis Jr. and Fess Parker (Davy Crockett).

Disneyland in California is the first of the Disney parks, and the only "enchanted kingdom" and saw designed by Walt Disney. Walt Disney had to build it to borrow money in part to ABC in exchange for the production of the famous series Disneyland later named Wonderful World of Walt Disney.
The park was built on a former orange grove in Anaheim, in Orange County, about thirty miles southeast of Los Angeles. This is the smallest of Disney enchanted kingdoms. The park is nicknamed Happiest Place on Earth.
J'aimerai une traduction de meilleure qualité !

Merci beaucoup de votre aide ..



8 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 4 févr. 2012
Au pire si personne peut t'aider tu vas sur un site traduction en Anglais gratuit et tu copie/colle ton texte en français et tu lui demande de le traduire en Anglais.
Bon courage quand même!!!^^'
Anonyme
Posté le 4 févr. 2012
The project was born in 1948 in the form of an internal memo from Walt Disney. In 1952, a milestone with the creation of WED Enterprises, a company dedicated to the design of the park. After a year of work, and an investment of $ 17 million dollars, the park was inaugurated Saturday, July 17, 1955 and opened to the public the next day. The inauguration was televised in a special program called Dateline: Disneyland It was broadcast on ABC by Walt Disney and many Hollywood actors or personalities including Ronald Reagan, Bobby Driscoll, Frank Sinatra, Sammy Davis Jr. and Fess Parker (Davy Crockett).

Disneyland in California is the first of the Disney parks, and the only "enchanted kingdom" and saw designed by Walt Disney. Walt Disney had to build it to borrow money in part to ABC in exchange for the production of the famous series then called Disneyland Wonderful World of Walt Disney.
The park was built on a former orange grove in Anaheim, in Orange County, about thirty miles southeast of Los Angeles. This is the smallest of Disney enchanted kingdoms. The park is nicknamed "The happiest place in the world"

Je crois que ma traduction est presque identique à la tienne, donc je pense que ce que tu as fait c'est bon .













Anonyme
Posté le 4 févr. 2012
The project was born in 1948 in the form of an internal memo from Walt Disney. In 1952, Walt Disney founded WED Enterprises*, a company dedicated to the design of the park. After a year of work, and an investment of $ 17 million dollars, the park was inaugurated on Saturday, July 17, 1955 and opened to the public the next day. The inauguration was televised in a special program called Dateline: Disneyland .It was broadcast on ABC with Walt Disney and many Hollywood actors or personalities including Ronald Reagan, Bobby Driscoll, Frank Sinatra, Sammy Davis Jr. and Fess Parker (Davy Crockett).

Disneyland in California is the first of the Disney parks, and the only "enchanted kingdom" Walt Disney designed and saw.. Walt Disney had to borrow money to build it in part to ABC in exchange for the production of the famous Disneyland series later named Wonderful World of Walt Disney.
The park was built on a former orange grove in Anaheim, in Orange County, about thirty miles southeast of Los Angeles. This is the smallest of Disney enchanted kingdoms. The park is nicknamed Happiest Place on Earth.


*WED for Walter Elias Disney
Anonyme
Posté le 4 févr. 2012
ton travail était très bon cependant
Anonyme
Posté le 4 févr. 2012
The project was born in 1948 in the form of an internal memo from Walt Disney. In 1952, a milestone with the creation of WED Enterprises, a company dedicated to the design of the park. After a year of work, and an investment of $ 17 million dollars, the park was inaugurated Saturday, July 17, 1955 and opened to the public the next day. The inauguration was televised in a special program called Dateline: Disneyland It was broadcast on ABC by Walt Disney and many Hollywood actors or personalities including Ronald Reagan, Bobby Driscoll, Frank Sinatra, Sammy Davis Jr. and Fess Parker (Davy Crockett).

Disneyland in California is the first of the Disney parks, and the only "enchanted kingdom" and saw designed by Walt Disney. Walt Disney had to build it to borrow money in part to ABC in exchange for the production of the famous series Disneyland later named Wonderful World of Walt Disney.
The park was built on a former orange grove in Anaheim, in Orange County, about thirty miles southeast of Los Angeles. This is the smallest of Disney enchanted kingdoms. The park is nicknamed "The happiest place in the world"
pour trouver ca, j ai tout simplement aller sur google traduction. j espere que ca t aidera. MAIS BIEN SUR CHANGE LES MOTS QUI NE VEULENT RIEN DIRE .
Anonyme
Posté le 4 févr. 2012
Merci !
Anonyme
Posté le 4 févr. 2012
Merci beaucoup , ton travail est très bien :D
Anonyme
Posté le 5 févr. 2012
The project was born in 1948 in the form of an internal memo from Walt Disney. In 1952, a milestone with the creation of WED Enterprises, a company dedicated to the design of the park. After a year of work, and an investment of $ 17 million dollars, the park was inaugurated Saturday, July 17, 1955 and opened to the public the next day. The inauguration was televised in a special program called Dateline: Disneyland It was broadcast on ABC by Walt Disney and many Hollywood actors or personalities including Ronald Reagan, Bobby Driscoll, Frank Sinatra, Sammy Davis Jr. and Fess Parker (Davy Crockett).

Disneyland in California is the first of the Disney parks, and the only "enchanted kingdom" and saw designed by Walt Disney. Walt Disney had to build it to borrow money in part to ABC in exchange for the production of the famous series then called Disneyland Wonderful World of Walt Disney.
The park was built on a former orange grove in Anaheim, in Orange County, about thirty miles southeast of Los Angeles. This is the smallest of Disney enchanted kingdoms. The park is nicknamed "The happiest place in the world"

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