texte que j'ai écris sur John Lenon en anglais merci de me le corriger .

John Lennon was a member of the famous music band, the Beatles. He was born the october 9th 1940 in Liverpool (England). He was an amazing song writter and singer and he still has a lot of fans all over the world. He married Yoko One, a brillant artist, in 1969. His most famous song is "Imagine" wich is about love and peace. He was assassinated the december 8th 1980 after a concert by one of his fan. Today, he's still considered as one of the most brillant and popular singer of the seventies.

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Ton texte est bien ! =)

Ton texte n'a pratiquement aucune erreur! :)
juste à :I am sure that you know his famous song it was “imagine”of course ., je te conseille de mettre plutôt: His most famous song, that you surely know, was Imagine of course.
Je n'avais pas vu que tu avais déjà commencé ton texte donc j'en ai écrit un au-dessu mais tu peux garder le tient, il est très bien!

john lennon was born on october 9,1940 in liverpoo.from 1960 to 1970 he played with the beatles the most succesful rock group in history.the beatles travelled all around the world from 1963 to 1970 and they played in hundreds of different places.lennon married yoko ono in 1969 and he movrd to the united states with his family.he composed and recorded songs like ''i don't want to be a soldier''and the very famous song ''imagine'' during the 70s.for the whole world lennon 35 symbolized peace and love.

Jonh Lenon was born on october the 9th 1940 and he was from Liverpool(In England).
He was an excellent singer and song writer .His wife was Yoko Ono they get married in 1969.
In THE 1950-1970 he played with the beatles and travelled all around the world .
I am sure that you know his famous song it was “imagine”of course . HE REPRENTED PEACE AND LOVE. John Lenon was death on 8 december 1980 he was assassinated by a lunatic.

J'ai mit ma correction en majuscule.

Mdr, nous aussi on doit faire la biographie de John Lennon, Lady di, Bob Marley ou Elvis Presley ! Donc, ce que tu dis :
"Jonh Lenon was born on october the 9th 1940 and he was from Liverpool(In England).
He was an excellent singer and song writer .His wife was Yoko Ono they get married in 1969.
In 1950-1970 he played with the beatles and travelled all around the world .
I am sure that you know his famous song it was “imagine”of course .He symbolized peace and love .
John Lenon was death on 8 december 1980 he was assassinated by a lunatic."
Ce qu'il serait mieu de dire (à mon avis) :
(Si je recopie pas c'est que c'est juste)
JoHN (et pas NH, fait attention) Lennon was born on october the 9th 1940 in Liverpool (England).
From 1950 to 1970 he ...
John Lenon died on december, the 8th 1980, he was assassinated (le by a lunatic n'est pas essensiel, il a été assassiné par un assassin, après le reste...)
Sinon c'est très bien ! ^^ =D

on ne dit pas was death mais died

Oui, c'est gentil Damien16 mais je vien de le dire --'

J'ai eu le même exercice que toi l'année dernière. tu es dans quel collège ?

they got married (au passé)
travelled around the world (pas besoin du all)
his famous song, imagine.
"He symbolized peace and love"> ce mieux si tu dis He was an icon of peace and love
John Lenon died...He was murdered by a lunatic

:)