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Publié le 15 nov. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 22 nov. 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Comment vous voyez vous dans cinq ans ? (au niveau professionnel)
- quel métier
- quelles études
- pourquoi ce choix

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

In 5 years, I would love to be a clinical psychologist in an institution that helps children and / or teenagers experiencing difficulties. Actually, I am not interested at all by working in a private practice but rather in connection with other professionals in institutions. In particular, I am really interest by working in a Psychological Medical Center (CMP). It is for children and adolescents with autism or psychotic disorders, but also for children and adolescents with adjustment difficulties, psychomotor disorders, behavioral problems, revealing itself (and they reveal themselves) most often in the school environment. It is composed of a large team of professionals such as psychiatrists, psychologists, speech therapists, social workers… Moreover, I’m also particularly interest to work in foster homes for children, where they are placed by court order.

However, my choices may still evolve, change or become more specific. Indeed, I always knew I wanted to work in social and I was attracted by the idea of helping other people. But if you asked me what I wanted to do in my senior year in high school, I would have said that I wanted to become a school teacher or a specialized educator (it’s a teacher specialized in the Education of Individuals with Disabilities). But it is at the end of the year that I realized I wanted to study psychology because I thought it was missing something in the two other professions, maybe a real listening and a way to use my sensitivity. I was also very interested in understanding the psychological functionement of individuals and psychopathology. Moreover, I like the fact that psychology is not a field that can be (completely known) fully acquired, it is always in motion because there is always a part of mystery and new theory and research appears very often. A psychologist must always be aware of it, read and learn during his career.

When I decided to study psychology, I did not know if I wanted to work with children, adults or old people. My different internships permit me to discovered the work with children, teenagers and old people.

Even if I like old people and the contact going very well, I think there is mostly work in neurology about diseases of old age such as Parkinson's and Alzheimer's. Besides, I do not like neurology, so I could not see myself working in that field. Also, I think there is a different relationship with the elderly but also that there would be less diversity than in children and adolescents. Indeed, with children there are many different options such as dealing with child victims, child offenders, children with disabilities or placed...

To conclude, next year, I think that I am gonna choose a master of clinical psychology of children and adolescents, or a master of psychopathology with a specialization in childhood and teenagers in master two. In both cases, I could work in structures that I want. Moreover, I hesitate to specialize myself in research in master two because I think it can be really interesting too.



5 commentaires pour ce devoir


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Anonyme
Posté le 15 nov. 2011
in particular I'd really enjoy (plutot que repeter i'm interested)working in a cmp.Moreover,I 'd apreciate to work in foster homes.(1er paragraphe)C'est bien construit,mais attention aux repetitions.
Anonyme
Posté le 15 nov. 2011
pourquoi pas move au lieu de evolve? At the end of the year,iI realized that something missed in the two others jobs and this that I had chosen would ofer me a way to use my sensitivity and my ability to listen to people.I thought important to work in an area which is never finished,which knows often news researchs that modify the paractise.(2ème paragraphe,je l'ai synthétisé,vous en avez trop mis et vous vous englué dans la partie choix de fin d'année.Il faut faire plus simple.)
Anonyme
Posté le 15 nov. 2011
les 4 lignes qui suivent,c'esr de l'etourderie dans la conjugaison je pense.je ne corrige pas.The fact is that with old people,the work will be more concentrated on neurological diseases as alzheimer or parkinson for example-and I'm convicted to find more diversity of cases in a younger population like the teenagers or children.The differents situations that may know younger people as placement,as victim,etc suppose differents ways to help them .(correction du paragraphe 3)Vous a- t-on demandé de choisir entre 3ème age et adolescence?à cause du nombre de places?
Anonyme
Posté le 15 nov. 2011
la dernière phrase de votre conclusion,je ne la comprends pas-sorry!-quelle est la grosse différence entre psychopathologie et psychologie clinique ?Vous avez l'air en dépit de ce que vous dites plus tourné vers la pratique que vers la recherche.Or la psuchopathologie,si j'ai bien lu entre les lignes c'est plus accentué recherche,c'est un champ d'application plus vaste.Etes-vous sur de vouloir vous occuper exclusivement d'enfants et ados à vie?
Anonyme
Posté le 15 nov. 2011
Merci beaucoup, je vais essayer de corriger tout ca en fonction de ce que vous m'avez dit, mais vous m'avez déjà beaucoup aidé !!
On ne nous demande pas spécifiquement de choisir entre le troisième age et l'adolescence mais on risque de ne pas avoir le choix lors de la décision en master 1 ou 2 car pour les personnes agées il faut s'orienter plutôt vers les neurosciences... Et si on décide de s'orienter dans la psychologie clinique par exemple, on devra choisir une spécialisation de toute façon en master 2 donc oui il est plutot important de savoir quel public nous interesse.
Il n'y a pas de grande différence entre psychologie clinique et psychopathologie, il y a meme des masters qui combinent les deux, c'est pour cela que je dis que quel que soit mon choix : clinique ou psychopathologique, il aboutira aux memes résultats, je pourrais tout a fait travailler dans les CMP ou foyers... Après, peut etre que je l'ai mal formulé en anglais et qu'on ne me comprend pas, je suis plutot nulle en anglais il faut l'avouer et je trouve ce sujet pas très inspirant, il faut rajouter du blabla pour rien mais bon.
Oui je suis plus tournée vers la pratique mais je voulais juste dire à la fin que j'envisage la recherche également car cela m'interesse également beaucoup et, m'orienter en master 2 de recherche ne m'empecherait pas de travailler dans un cmp donc au final, cela revient également au meme.


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