Oral Bac; Places and forms of power

First of all, I would like to give a definition of "Places and forms of power". This notion refers to different kind of power that is to say different king of governments, such as dictatorship or democracies. Moreover, it could deal with the places and the reasons why these forms of power exist and what the consequences are. There can be  social discriminations, wars...
To illustrate this topic, I am going to talk about the troubled relationship between Aboriginal Australians and White population. How have the Aborigines accepted the Whites supremacy?
I will study this question along three lines ( je dirais my presentation ; is divided into three main parts. Firstly, I will talk about the  aborigene origins and their colonization, secondly, I will talk about the "stolen generation", and finally I will talk about the current relationship between Aboriginal Australians and white people. 

Firstly, commence direct par ça met pas firstly, ça donne plus d'effet 

Aborigines  lives le temps convient pas  in Australia since 40.000 before JC, they are one of oldest civilization. They thrived in Australia, usually in nomadic societies. Some developed distinct tools and musical instrument which are still popular today. At the time of Europeans first established a colony in Australia in 1788, there were around 300 000 Aboriginals. However, with the colonization, new diseases, violence spurred by racism and oppressive land-use policies devastated many of the traditional societies. Aboriginal people account for just 3% of the Australian population. 

Colonization is a part of Aboriginal people's history,

The stolen generation from 1900 to 1970, is intended to delete the interbreeding. For that children were removed from their family by the government official change par official governement, welfare bodies and missionaries. They were put in into institutions or they were adopted. They were denied all access to their culture, they had to adopt the values of whites (tu dis trop de fois people). In the film of Peter Weir, the rabbit proof fence: Molly, Gracie and Daisy are 3 girls and they are removed from their family to be educated in the Anglo-European system, by they arrived to run away.
Now relationship between Aborigines and whites trop de fois people are more peaceful, but there is always a resentment to white people ENCORE  

In our day, tu peux remplacer par nowadays c'est le même sens mais ça fait moins retranscrit du fr when Aboriginal people are reacting to "Australia Day", and they answer that is a day of mourning, "invasion day", their survival... Because Australia day is January the 26th 1788, and it celebrate the creation of the first British colony in Australia, but Aboriginal people were living in Australia since longer. sincèrement j'ai pas trop compris ce passage 

To conclude, Aborigines were victims of discriminations by the government, in fact it causes the death of a large part of aboriginal community, and many children never saw their family and other members of their community ever again. Now theses tenses are calmed even if there is always rancour. 

c'est du bon boulot !! je t'ai corrigé quelques erreurs les plus frappantes, à toi de les garder ou pas, fait comme tu veux, juste remplace les "people" tu le dit pleeeein de fois 

ET BONNE CHANCE, on est tous dans la même galère