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Bonsoir pouvez vous me corriger mon dialogue SVP c'est pour demain ! merci d avance!!M- i have to say something but promise me that you never tell to anyone
E- what's going on? You know that you can trust me
M- yes i know but it's so hard and i'm scared
E- scared ? About what ? Somebody hurt you ?
M- its about my boyfriend
E- karim ? What he did ? Its over between us ?
M- please just don'd judge me you i need to talk.... Karim beat me but sometimes its my fault i know that he loves me and he just want protect me
E- what ? Just stop ! You can say that and i don't understand why karim do that but if he beat him you couldn't stay with him and when it started ?
M- i'm very lost but this pain it so hard it started a long time ago but i think that i need help but nevertheless i love him
E- oh please ! Don't talk me of love you are a smart girl you are not stupid and first of all you left him and you come live with me
M- i can't leave him he done not agree about that
E- i don't care i protect you please just listen me and do what i tell you. Where is he ?
M- i don't know i'm alone E- take what you need and come to me M- maybe he stoped to hit me if i just talked to him
E- don't panic you come to me and we seen just relax now you must be in a shelter.
Ps: m=premiere personne et e = deuxième personne du dialogue amie
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E- what's going on? You know that you can trust me
M- yes i know but it's so hard and i'm scared
E- scared ? About what ? Did somebody hurt you ?
M- its about my boyfriend
E- karim ? What did he do? Its over between you and him ?
M- please just don't judge me I need to talk.... Karim beat me but sometimes its my fault i know that he loves me and he just wants to protect me
E- what ? Just stop ! You can't say that and i don't understand why karim does that but if he beats you, you can't stay with him anymore! when did it started ?
M-This pain is hard, it started a long time ago and i think that i need help but nevertheless i love him
E- oh please ! Don't talk me of love you are a smart girl you are not stupid! first of all you need to leave him and to come live with me
M- i can't leave him he will never agree about that
E- i don't care I have to protect you please just listen to me and do what i tell you. Where is he ?
M- i don't know i'm alone E- take what you need and come with me M- maybe he will stop hitting me if i just talk to him
E- don't panic, just relax now you must be in a shelter. We'll talk about it later
voilà bonne soirée (je n'ai pas le temps d'expliquer toute les fautes désolée)